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Hpppiness
Happiness is an important aim that everybody pursuit. Many elements like self-confidence, family relationships and respect from others will all contribute to happiness. But it takes our great efforts to attain happiness.
Happiness is hard to be defined. It is an abstract feeling. Firstly, it is impossible to measure it in amount. So it is hard to describe the degree. Then, it is also difficult to define what true happiness is. In other words, there are positive happiness and the negative types. When you get lazy and decide to relax while you ought to work. You may feel the pleasure of release but with guilty of not having your work done. So, not all the pleasure can be described as happiness. To the contrary, bad feelings can also count for happiness. Such as hard works can be recalled sweet after the goal is achieved, parents' devotion to their children can also be a kind of happiness.
There important factors in achieving happiness. First of all, a good condition of health is the guarantee of happiness. Illness brings sorrow. Secondly, most happiness for a human comes form the relationships of family I believe. So, it is vital to keep family members in harmony. lastly, another important factor is the sense of achievement from career. A person can feel himself valuable and respected getting his work well done. They are the main reasons to achieve happiness. But the key to handle these factors well is self-controlling. Without abuse of your body, the trust of your family and your working time. A person can get his life well organized. And that is the key point to living a happy life.
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The usage of negative sentences
As " I talked a lot as I usually did. "
what if i want to say
I didn't talk much as I usually didn't? Is this expression right? :D
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total or totally?
走路完全是浪费时间 which expression is right, please?
walking is a total waste of time.
or Walking is totally a waste of time?
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test 1,writing task 2
It is essential for children at a young age to develop a correct conscience, which comes from proper parenting. And punishment is an essential and effective approach to keep correct actions remembered. However, punishment is a method but not the purpose. Over punishments will always lead to bad effects. Therefore, I am partly agreed with the statement(which is punishment is necessary).
firstly, punishment is very effective. Children who got punished will be afraid of making mistakes again. So bad actions will be effectively avoid when the children have a inappropriate intention. Secondly, punishment is important. Correcting bad behavior when children was at a young age can prevent they from making worse mistakes older. And punishing can help children develop a good quality, which is vital for their entire life.
However, over punishment may cause the opposite effection on a child, or even bad influence. No one likes to be punished unreasonably. So when punished inappropriately, a child will not be convinced for his mistake but react the bad behavior to express his dissatisfaction or an act of resistance to the adults.However, there can be worse effects. A child who was long-term punished may get introverted and fear to express his thoughts, which may lead to his failure of life. Also, punishment can express an idea that it is ok for people to bully others who are weaker to a child. That may cause bullying in campuses.
To sum up, punishment should be carried out appropriately. It is a good way to award children when they are doing something nice. That will deliver a signal that the opposite act will be discouraged, which reduces the usage of punishment.Also it is better to communicate more with children and teach them to tell right from wrong before inappropriate actions occur. In my opinion, communication, understanding and a good model of the parents will always have better effects than punishment.
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writing task 2
Nowadays, there is a tendency for young people finishing high school to work or travel for a year before starting university studies.
There are advantages to working or travelling before entering a university. Firstly, it is a good way to get a better understanding of a society. Experiences from an active social life can complement academic knowledge. Secondly, students who travelled for a year are more independent, which is an important quality of young people. Lastly, working in the social environment ahead of time will provide students with a clearer target to work harder for. They will be more diligent than normal students.
However, travelling or working before university studies can also be a concern. Students may never come back to school as a result of adapting to a particular social lifestyle, although unlikely to happen since a diploma is necessary to find an appealing job. Other concerns can be expenses and sacrifciing the precious time of our youth..
In my opinion, working or travelling for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies, in general, is beneficial for students. Establishing an early connection with society gives students a clearer idea of their lives and a greater incentive to do well in college.
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