Hi guys! Could you help me this my writing After the third debate the world froze. Everybody is waiting for the culmination this breathtaking race that will win the strongest leader. However, a lot of people just don’t want to go to the polls and want to ignore the election. Nowadays people need a new world leader due to the fact, that citizens left with a lot of questions to current leaders. Today’s leadership requires the best types of personality, such us trustworhty, analytical well balanced. Trustworthiness is one of the most important qualities of the whole of mankind ever. Some days ago one of the world leaders – the King of Thailand passed away. The people of his country are crying even now. This man did a lot of good things for his nation. The country trusted and was thankful for him all of his days in government. The current leaders should be trustworthy and every step of their work, action, and performance must be clear and understandable. Next, the analytical thinking is a crucial quality of personality for these days. There are plenty of tasks in which the leader has to solve every day. Furthermore, this type of personality directly connects with logical type thinking and leads to the ability to quickly find an effective and optimal solution in any given situations. There is actually an interesting fact that logical and analytical thinking are saved to a ripe old age, until such time when the brain is atrophied and not lose the capacity for rational study of the world. Finaly, I will talk about one more pivotal qualiy such as the well-balanced quality of personality. The great example of worldleaders who successfully presented this quality such us is Indira Gandhi. This great woman could do incredible things with the help of her harmonious approaches towards the government in India. It is really important to stay calm and dignified in front common people and in front of other countries at any given time. In conclusion, whole of these qualities will improve and refine every country in the world. Every country is waiting for trustworhty believable leader who can get people to good life and every person will confident in the future days.

Hi guys! Could you help me with my writing ? After the third debate the world froze. Everybody is waiting for the culmination this breathtaking race that will win the strongest leader. However, a lot of people just don’t want to go to the polls and want to ignore the election. Nowadays people need a new world leader due to the fact, that citizens left with a lot of questions to current leaders. Today’s leadership requires the best types of personality, such us trustworhty, analytical well balanced. Trustworthiness is one of the most important qualities of the whole of mankind ever. Some days ago one of the world leaders – the King of Thailand passed away. The people of his country are crying even now. This man did a lot of good things for his nation. The country trusted and was thankful for him all of his days in government. The current leaders should be trustworthy and every step of their work, action, and performance must be clear and understandable. Next, the analytical thinking is a crucial quality of personality for these days. There are plenty of tasks in which the leader has to solve every day. Furthermore, this type of personality directly connects with logical type thinking and leads to the ability to quickly find an effective and optimal solution in any given situations. There is actually an interesting fact that logical and analytical thinking are saved to a ripe old age, until such time when the brain is atrophied and not lose the capacity for rational study of the world. Finaly, I will talk about one more pivotal qualiy such as the well-balanced quality of personality. The great example of worldleaders who successfully presented this quality such us is Indira Gandhi. This great woman could do incredible things with the help of her harmonious approaches towards the government in India. It is really important to stay calm and dignified in front common people and in front of other countries at any given time. In conclusion, whole of these qualities will improve and refine every country in the world. Every country is waiting for trustworhty believable leader who can get people to good life and every person will confident in the future days.

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Hey guys! could you help me to rewrite this sentence: The good quality of sleeping brings about several approaches how to reach the success: sleeping at the same time, regularly getting some exercise during the week, and using some smart technologies.

Hi there guys! Could you help me with my text After the third debate the world freezed. Everybody is waiting for the culmination this breathtaking race where will win the strongest leader. However, a lot of people just don’t want to to the polls and ignore the election. Nowadays people need a new world leader due to the fact, that citizens left with a lot of questions to current leaders. Today the leadership requires best types of personality, such us trustworhty, analitical well ballanced. Trustworthy is one of the important qualities of the whole humankind in whole times ever. Some days ago one of the world leaders – King of Thailand passed away. People of his country are crying even now. This man did a lot of good things for his nation. The country trust and thankful him whole days of his government. The current leaders should be trustworthy and every step of their work, action, performance must be clear and understandable. Next, the analitical thinking is crucial quality of personality for these days. There are planty tasks wich the leader has to solve every day. Furthermore, this type of personality directly connects with logical type thinking and leads to the ability to quickly find effective and optimal solution in given situations. By the way, there is one interesting fact that logical and analytical thinking are saved to a ripe old age, until such time as the brain is atrophied and not lose the capacity for rational study of the world. Finaly, I gonna talk about one more pivotal qualiy such as the well-ballanced quality of personality. The great example of worldleader who successfully presented this quality such us main one is Indira Gandhi. This great woman could make incredible things with help harmonical approaches of government in India. It is really important to save calm of feelings and dignity in front common people and in front of other countries at any time. In conclusion, whole of these qualities will improve and refine every country in the world. Every country is waiting for trustworhty believable leader who can get people to good life and every person will confident in the future days.

Hey guys how is it going? Could you help me with me writing? I disagree with statement that young people cannot teach older people. In my opinion many people can share their knowledge and skills any time. Now days, the century of technology develops so fast and young people can get more knowledge with their peers than older people in case of free time. Also young teachers more dynamic and can imporove their study skills faster than older teachers that can lead to more modern education. The primary reason is people can share experience and knowledge in any age of their life. And young people can give some avices more older people as well. In my experience, when I only started to learn english language I already was 35 years old and average age of students of evening school which I went was 23-25 years old. Thise pepole with pleasure have given me a lot of general tips and knowledge that they already had. Next reason that older people have less free time for go and study something. Whereas parents have much routine their childrien are going to schools or universities where they are getting new knowledge. So in this case the children can discuss and share new progressive and modern information with the parent. Finally young teachers more dynamic and productive than old professors. Some of them do not have families and can more times paricipate in educational seminars and confirensions. In our school we have some teachers who constantly visit the teacher talks or another inmortant events. In conclusion, in the education process the age has not important role. There are a lot of great old professors and mature and young teachers who have excellent study skills and can share them with more older people. Today many people can get many different courses after job at night where young teachers will deliver to them the important latest skillful knowledge.

One more try ) toefl essay Nowdays qoverments and privat schools provide manys music and art classes. Students can have many different subjects of these classes. I agree with the opinion all studentys required have to study music and art in secondary school. I think than earlier students will get this information than better and in this age they it will help to develop their creative skills. Also it will help them in college education in future. My first reason is young kids still don’t developed in secondary schools and in this age the information memorise much better than later. Students have not fully developed muscles and bones wich need for music skills. Music exercises will develop and refine nessesery muscles and bones that harder to develop in more late age. In case of art, secondary school students will memorize art much more easier than in high school. Next, in my opinion music and art classes are crucial now in our techology life. Today people have many design, architechure and a lot of another magors witch need creative skills. Than earlier students will start to develop these skills than faster their capabilities will develop. And wheh students will start hight school or colletge they already will can play music or draw pictures, that really important and can help children in future. After schools childrien will face in undregraduate education. Even it known that during two years they will study general subjects students already will have done some musical and art classes and can focus on more precisely subjecsts. That part of student who will continue to sudy art or music also will have the basis of the subjects. In conclusion, I can say that skills such us music, art are pivotal in any time of our life and we have parties or go to see concerts we excitied and enjoy people who can play music or draw beautiful and fun pictures in short period of time. And if students will get this schools in middle schools they would have oppourtunities play music, create something already when they study first years in college.

Good evening! Could you help me improve my writing) I'll glad any suggestions of peers or teachers! I disagree with the following statement: it is more important study humanities and social science than precisely science such as mathematics, physics or geometry. In my point of view people should develop harmonicly and sink in all tipes of science and especially math and physics. Now days humanity lives in technology century and we need technical skills. There are a lot of applications, programs or data base and we should can operate with them any time of or live. Students should harmonically developing and have access to any tipe of information, get knowledge not only literature or history. I think our school should provide a lot of variety of classes and students will get different subjecst for theire future cariers. Moreover, if people will get only limited knowledge their educational would be not widespreded. Although, some magors don’t requre ample knowledge or skills but there are a lot of managers positions. Big part of our world is developed and people need technical skiils for operate it. If we will look around us we would see computers everywhere. We need knowledge for maintanice and manage them. All of this tasks people can do after getteng some techical information in schools.

Hey guys! Could you correct my writing? I disagree with the statement that people never satisfied with what they have. In my opinion there so many people live on Earth and some of them satisfied wiith their jobs, familiy and things that they have and Also there are other group of people who do not satisfied this deals at the moment of time. Some people can not stop to by new cars. Many my friends love have good cars but when we meet our topic of conversation espessialy touchs our cars. And these guys this fun and so powerful energy tell about new cars, new opotions and techonlogy of modern cars. In this case they constantly want to by new car and this new car must be better than previous car. Simellarly other people want to live in better houses. Even if now they have good conditions for living they want to live in better houses or apartments. In my case, I use to live at remote neiborhood and comute to work every day by car. It took 1 or 1 hour and 30 minutes. So, while I went to the job I always dreamed about new apartment which would have more space for living. On the other hand absolut different group of people that like and enjoy their apartments, houses or cars. They live with happiness and fun and relish every minute of their life. Moreover, this guys always can talk with confidence about their lifes in companies or with job collegues. In conclusion, I can say that not all people never satisfied with their succees, conditions of their life or just cars. Many people love and focus for another tasks and gols. A lot of people have one level of their life and enjoy travel, their families parents and friends. Now I am trying to do this line of my life.