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Essay #1 for IELTS In many countries children are engaged in different kinds of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it a valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion? Some people in different countries totally disagree with youngster’s employment where as others believe that it let the juveniles to get significant skills for studying and make them more accountable. This essay discusses both sides of this argument, and then I will give my own perspective. Undoubtedly, child’s labor has a lot of disadvantages. The major drawback is that youngsters might lose time for typical childhood activities because of work. Initially, kid should recognize such things as books, sport, games with friends and so on. It is important because it develops basic intellectual and physical abilities. Otherwise, for example, if a child will work instead of reading he or she might face with problems during the education because of low erudition. Another disadvantage is about the community of adults at work. It would be better if juveniles meet each other. However, there are also advantages if the juveniles will earn money by their own labor. First of all, kids can get some important skills which can be useful in the future. For instance, if a child turns a penny as a paperboy, probably, he won’t have problems with mathematics because he has to count money for the newspapers. Furthermore, any job implies some duties and often fixed work time. Because of this young employee have to do his work properly and come in time. Clearly, that as a result it makes children more accountable. In conclusion, I believe both sides of the argument have their merit. In my opinion, labor is a good challenge and practice for juveniles which allows them became more accountable and can give them other benefits in the future. But child labor must be under the strictly control of growns and do not prevents natural children’s activities. In this case a part time work seems more suitable.
August 16, 2016
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