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Needs some corrections IT security is one of the issues we have right now in our society. Implementing the substantial changes to a complex IT infrastructure costs money, and we cannot see the benefits. Ed Sperling says security works like preventive medicine. You do not really know if it is working or exactly how well it is working, but you do know when it fails [5]. Despite of that, ignoring IT security is not the solution. Each company has its own way that might not necessary work in other system. Therefore it is up to the CIO and his or her security experts to figure out what is at risk within their own companies and IT systems, and then to apply their own formulas [5]. For that reason, networks must have their needed money for protection

Looking for corrections please! Management of companies has a main rule in networks protecting. First step to have a secure data protection begins in the boardroom therefore company leadership has to support the IT team in its achievement. Because cyber security affects the entire organization, it should, without a doubt, require board oversight [2]. Furthermore, Robert C. Covington says that company management must acknowledge information security as a priority, and support the IT team in its implementation. While a fortune is not required, it isn’t free either [ 3].Furthermore, the manager should be aware of the steps toward having a secure data operation, because supporting the IT team is not the only important thing.many organizations seem to think that just the purchase solves some of their problems[4]. This job requires focus due to the responsibility behind being IT manager.

CAN SOMEONE HELP ME SAYING THIS SENTENCE IN OTHER WORDS! While anti-virus software alone is not enough, it certainly has a role to play in catching known malware, spotting malicious behaviour, and checking the reputation of unknown files and URLs to see if they have been blacklisted

could you please help me improving my discussion part of my report!!! Considering information security as a serious problem by the management of companies, could be a step in the right direction. In addition, paying the IT team their needs of money also helps us knowing where the risk is in order to fix the issues in our networks. IT needs an independent budget. It must not necessarily be a big one, but only not to compare it with buying new computers or something else. Finally, Tools like firewalls are necessary and help in network security.Due to the low cost of these tools,companies tend to use them instead of IT experts.However, we cannot only depend on them.

YOU ARE WELCOME TO CORRECT! Education is one of the most important topics that researchers are interested in nowadays. furthermore, it is an essential demand for any job we are thinking to apply for. Parents see it as they learn thier children how to catch a fish rather than giving them one every day. Not only sending children to school is enough for learning, but also encourage them at home might help them to get more knowledge. in conclusion, parents have the most effective role in thier children's lives, and they have know to impact on them positively.

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