Search from various English teachers...
Posts
Help me correct it better
I love astronomy very much, passion and love for astronomy came to me when I first heard from my father about solar eclipse in 1995 - which made the sky was bright suddenly dark. I was curious to know why it could happened and this story urged me to learn, explore and keen on astronomy. Since then astronomy always plays a significant part in my life.
My school do not teach astronomy. But I have studied astronomy myself and this also quite same as which I study on class. When I learning astronomy, such as the telescope, I can learn more about optics, or reading about stars, I will know nuclear physics more - which I were taught on class. So that I can easily understand the lesson and reach better results.
Astronomy helped me learn a lot of real knowledge, which is really important in my daily life. I was not surprised when watch the C1 final start at 9:00 PM in Germany, but the sky is still bright, as I had known about the tilt of Earth's axis before.
2
0
Help me plsssssss
. Would my life come over and can not contribute anything for society different from my hope when I was a kid? Every night I put my hands on forehead asked myself, asked very, very much.
Then i listened to this sentence from my sister, it helped me woke up and realized i could not live like me before. All failures was because of me, as I was so , and ahead me would be a dark road if I still did not know to stand up. As I was so weak, did not dare to face the truth."Storms don't last forever" I just 16, why must I blench after this small failures? Leave failures behind, use it as motivation for me to progess. I knew I must change, change to swim in big sea.
I took part in music club of my school and Dak Lak Astronomy Club. They are my passions which were forgot as my weakness and computer screens. I read more literary books to feel essences, know more about life which i felt bored before
0
0
Help me plsssssssssss
Storms don't last forever- this was the sentence that my sister told me when i was in grade 10 and I will never forget it. Failed in gifted school, were addicted to computer games, and troubles with teenager love. I collapsed, lost all belief in myself, thought i could not do anything, but this sentence helped me return. And be stronger.
I travelled to Ha Noi to get my brain relax. Seeing the prosperity of city, I thought it would be very wonderful if i could have a normal house and get a good job here, that's enough. But after a while, I realized flip sides of Ha Noi, people are busy and do not care about anything around them. Sitting on slow buses as traffic, I looked around and thought about my future. Suppose I continue lost belief in myself, indulge in playing and lived like it ever, I could merely become a trivial staff, pick up briefcase to work every morning and come back home every evening (It's might not be)
4
0
Please help me corect it better
It was my trip with others good students in my father's company to Quy Nhon beach. I was a bit timid but they was very friendly so i quickly getting to know them. We play a minigames to choose the captain and it was me. I was a bit worry but i blame myself if i can't do i will aplogize all and give captain for others, anyway this is a good occasion for me to assert myself . I talked to every single, listen to them to know what are they strengths trait. After that, i made a working plan and show it to all, listen their opinions, eliminate some wrong points. With my ethusiasm and their cooperation, we supported each other to do well every things in my plan and end a memorable trip.
2
0
