An email
hello everybody,I wrote a composition,and Iwant you can help me to find some mistakes in the composition.Thank you very much.
here is the title:If you are a student from Xinhua middle school,you have a friend Tom from Amareca,he sent you a email a week ago to ask your summer vacation plan.and you didn't reply he,becaue you are preparing for the final exam.Please according to the points back to an E-mail to her:1:The reason why you didin't reply he in time 2:your summer vacation plan.
Dear Tom,
I'm so sorry that I didin't reply you in time, because I am preparing the final exam. I want you can understand me.
I want to have a travel in the summer vacation. I really want to go to Yunnan,that is a very beatiful place.Yunnan ham is very dilicious,I want to taste that. and I also want to have a par-time jod. Because I want to make some money for myself.I don't want ask money for my parents.On the other hand I want to be a volunteer,then I can help some people who need help.That can make me feel happy.what is your summer vacation plan?
I hope you can reply me as soon as possible you can .
yours,
Lihua