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Please correct it and make it more beautiful Ameriacan. Thank you so much!!
When I was young, I didn't have girlfiend. I just stayed with my mom and my grandmother all day. My mother love me so much, but she scares my father, so she can't protect me when my father beat me. But unlike my mother, my grandmother born my dad, so he must scares her. That is so luckily for me.
When young I was so naughty, so I would get the punishment, my dad would beat me. So, that maked me always thought that how to escaped beatting. And whenever I saw him took the wooden stick, immediately I run to my grandmother's house. My grandmother usually lied in bed. She was lying there and was chewing betel.
- Grandma, Grandmotherrrrrrr!!!! - I shouted and run to her.
- What happend, my boy? - My grandmother sit up and asked me
- My dad hit me!!! - I said
- Don't worry, come and lie with me!
My grandmother calmed me down and pulled me up into the bed. She hidden me on her back, so my dad can't saw me.
Later, my dad came to her house with the wooden stick and asked
- Mom, Do you see my son, Ngạn?? Did he run to here?
- No - My grandmother replied
I lie behind her back and my heart skip a beat. I just only felt better when I heard footstep walking far away.
In that time, I afraid to come home immediately. I always stayed and played with my grandma.
- Grandma, can you scratch my back? please!!! - I coddle
She didn't deny my request. She told me about her storys. The story that I learn it by heart. She don't have many storys.
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please spend your 1 minute correcting it for me. I am so grateful!
My friend will marry in October. Her husband is a businessman who is 21 years older than her. She is 21 and he is 42.
It would not matter if she was a stranger to me. But she is my friend.
We went to school togerther, learnt together, went to library together. And when I had trouble, I would tell her.
When we were in high school, there are many boys flirt with her, but she didn't like anyone of them. She said they weren't mature, she needed a adult who could protect her, gave her safe feeling.
The thing that makes me shock isn't her husband is older than her 21 years, but the fact that she will marry, she will be a woman that has her family. And now, she has a fiance, while I am single all time. I have no boyfiend up to now. I don't know what is love and the way to love someone. And my fiiend, she knows the way to be a wife.
Of course I'm so sad. I always think I will lost a friend. Maybe that's a wrong thought but i can't stop thinking about it
btw, I always hope she will be happy forever, her fiance will love her and they are a happy family
And my future boyfriend, where are you now????????
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"Mood of the day"- a Korean film (thanks so much for spending 1 minute correcting it for me)
I have already watched a film by Korean name "Mood of the day".
This film talk about Soo Jung (played by Moon Chae Won, a famous actress in Korean), she and her boyfriend are in a ten-year relationship. But maybe there is a problem in their relationship.
And one day, in a train to Busan, she meets Jae Hyun ( played by Yoo Yeon-seok, I don't know him, but through this film, I know that he is so cute) who is always flirty with every woman he meets. And he do that with Soo Jung, he says "Today, if you are fine with it, I'm going to sleep with you"
Oh my God, One-night stand. Of course she doesn't agree, because she has boyfriend.
But after spending a day togerther, Soo Jung realizes that Jae Hyun is a good people, she decides to sleep with him
When they are in hotel, he asks her why she changed her mind. She says all things she thought about him.
Oh, and in a moment, Jae Hyun decides he will not do that, he don't want to sleep with her. Not because he hates her, or he cheats her. Just because he realizes that: he loves her. And all things he want is more than one-night stand. He wants her. (oh, I think so =D)
Soo Jung is very angry. She thinks she was being played, and go out. He runs follow her and try to explain that he doesn't play her, he respects her. Finally, finally, they have one-night at basket gym :))
The next day, she turn back to Seoul, then they must say good bye in here
From that day, Soo Jung always thinks about Jae Hyun. She say good bye with her 10-year boyfriend. Not because of her, because he don't love her like before, and he don't make her happy, just always hurt her. Then going separate ways is the best solution.
After all, Soo Jung and Jae Hyun come back together. It's not one night stand, it is love.
The end of the film is very exciting.
I think its point is 7/10
July 9, 2016
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Euro 2016, France vs Portugal
I don't know alot about soccer, but after hearing what my friend said, I know France beats Germany to go to the Final.
My friend say France beats Germany 2-0 and she can't believe it. Before the match start, she sure 100% Germany will win, becase she is a big Germany fan. I don't know who is stronger, France or Germany, but I think no matter who are the winner, they are worthy.
She said she hoped Germany would meet Portugal in final, but now, it's impossible. France will go for a match against Portugal on Sunday. I don't know what time it start but in my country, it start at 2:00 AM
I have never watched a match before, but this final match, I think I will watch it with my friend. She asked me what I thought who the champion wil be. I don't know. In Portugal, they have Cristiano Ronaldo, a famous professional footballer. I know him because I see him in TV, he is advertising "Clear". Oh my God, I think he is so handsome. In France, I don't know everyone. But I think they are so powerful, because they can defeated Germany 2-0.
I think this is a match that promises to be a must-watch.
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Animals are so beautiful. And please don't hurt them anymore
I have watched many videos about injured animals. A cat with eyes was eaten by worms, a dog with leg was cut off by train, a cow injured from halter cuting into face, ...many and many another videos
SOme animals was injured by accident, but some was hurt by human.
I don't know why people are so cruel like that. And latestly, there are 2 students in India throw a dog off a rooftop in the southern city of Chennai. Oh My God. I don't know the reason why, but they shouldn't do that.
Another case is that a dog with a wound on his head is waiting to die. Everyone first thought he wil die. But they had tried the best to save him. When I watched the video, I cryed badly. This is the link : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bVdyQ0t9GN4
If I were an billionaire, I would donate money money money to organisation. BUt, I'm just a poor student .
And beside bad people, there are many good people. They spend all their life time to saving enjured animal, and giving them a home. I love and admire them so much.
That's all my thoughts. I wanna write it down to remember. But maybe my English is too bad to express by words. Hope you can make it perfecter!
Thanks all!
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Thanks so much for correcting it for me :)
Today I come back to the city. Tomorrow I will go to university after 2 weeks at home.
But when I came to my room in the city, I realize I did forget the key in my home.
So I must go to the "Stop and Go" coffee to wait my sister. I have waited her 2 hours, and I need to pee :(
I want to go toilet, but there are many strangers here. I can't leave my baggage here and go toilet.
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TODAY IS THE 4TH DAY OF TẾT HOLIDAY IN VIETNAM
Today, my old class visit teachers who taught us when we study at high school. I thought perhaps we would be so happy.
But I didn't feel happy as I had thought. I don't know why. I think because we have not seen each other in a long time. So now, maybe we become strangers.?! There is a long distance between us!
There is a girl in my class that I always envy her success. I know I shouldn't be, but she's beautiful, have a good sense of humor, and I don't. I wish I could be the same to her.
Sometimes I realize I am so selfish. Maybe I'm not a good friend.
I always asked myself if there is anybody had the same feeling like me!!
I hope I can change myself and I am trying to be better
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WRITE SOMETHING ABOUT ME
I am girl, 20 years old. I am from VietNam
I started learning English from I was in 6 grade. But to now, I don't make progress in my English's skill.
I can read what you write in English and understand it. But I can't listen what you say, and can't write well.
I think the reason my English never improve is that: I never pratice English, never make conversation with people, and I am so ashamed to speak English with people. I think they will laugh at me if I say something wrong.
So, I hope you will help me improve my English. Thanks so much! :D
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