Please amend my composition 31 Today’s weather is good, sun is shining brightly . Jim decides to go to the beach. He calls his friends, but nobody is free. So he decides to go to the beach by himself. He takes the swimwear, beach umbrella and new portable stereo radio When he arrive the beach, there are fewer people, he holds up the umbrella, then lie down. He turns on his radio and enjoys the wonderful music. Jim sleeps soon. On that time, a man comes over and sits down beside him. The man also has a small radio and play the same music as Jim, then the man take Jim’s radio. When Jim wake up, his radio is missing, but there is a small and old radio which is belong to the thief.

Please amend my composition20151123-My country-transportation in Inner Mongolia Do you know transportation in Inner Mongolia? The transportation is called LeLe gharry. It was used before long long .The gharry load all the luggage of herdsman. It is also called GuLu gharry and a old transportation. The gharry is made of birch and very handiness,It is suitable for walking on the grass and the snow. Now people are more likely to use tractors and cars, so we hardly see LeLe gharry.

Please help me to amend the composition20151122-My country-Inner Mongolia There is a grassland which is called Hulun Buir in the northeast of Inner Mongolia,the grassland is the most famous natural pasture in the world. There is not high mountains and trees, it is only has beautiful blue sky, fleecy white clouds,tercel fly in the sky,green grassland likes carpet,the stream like a fishing net,herds of cattle and sheep,running horse,clean and white tent,fresh air

Please help me to modify the composition20151121 Today I learned English with my Filipino teacher on Skype began 9:00 AM end 10:00 AM, She taught me to learn knowledge from books which the name is "Side by Side 4". The book has lots of new words and pictures, I like it as it is amusing when I learn it. tomorrow I will learn in my local school, I also have a Chinese teacher,he always teach me some grammar,he is 25 years old, he liked English for a long time.

my work 20151121 I am a fiancial manager I need to work erery weekday. I should do the following jobs: 1. I should check my subordinate's work and judge if they are correct 2. I need to plan we must use how many money next week and send the email to my boss, he will remit money to me for company run 3. I need to make an account receivable statement and send them to my colleagues and my custmers 4. I need to make a list which has been shipped and send them to my colleagues, then they can know our sales amount 5. I should make our company's financial report and send them to my colleagues and boss and sales director, then they can know how much our company earned I like my job, sometimes I feel it has a little bored, but I must bear it as that is my major. If I want to change the situation I should change my Job,Do you think so ? May be you can tell me some good advice. Good noon :)

Write about my job I work for a company, I am a financial manage my customers are in UK,so i must learn english. I need to write email to them and speak to my UK's colleague i have a Philippines teacher, i always talked with her, I can understand her if i know all words. but i can't understand my UK's colleague,because their accent. i think there are many kind of accent in UK as my two UK's colleague have different pronunciation.