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Please correct my diary
I separated the diary because it's too long.
And this is second half.
⇒First half
https://www.italki.com/notebook/2824606/entry/815968
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Modern people isn't used to get for free, create, solution.
You have problem?
So what should you do!?
You can't change if you don't take measures!!
In many cases, people who complain against significant other or boss of your campany for long term don't take measures by themselves,
You may want someone to change by themselves because you don't move.
That's hope won't come true.
If you have dissatisfaction to someone, you had better say that.
You try to change someone.
You try to take a break from someone.
You try to receive someone.
There should be much way to result.
To act by your self is earlier than you hope someone you can't control to change by himself.
Because you can control you by your will.
There is no time to say "Oink, Oink! Give me feed!".
Let's manage by ourselves!
The problem we can't result now is material for implovement, treasure.
Not wait the feed time. At first I act.
In that there is source of evolution.
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Please correct my English
I'ts too long so I separate the diary
---The first half---
[To do everything by myself. It's important.]
I made my hair cut today.
To be honest, I made my hair cut myself for 4 years.
Certainly I'm not hairdresser but I've become better step by step.
At first time my hair was awful and I was looked down by classmate of university.
But I don't have choice to stop anything because of getting laughed by people and my hair become looks better.
"Do myself what I can do."
"Never buy something that I can get for free from somewhere"
If I can't get then think "whether I create".
If I can get or create everything by myself, even poverty is no longer fear.
I lived in overwhelming poverty.
But I'm never struggling with living.
When I have no money, I can set a trap nearby river and make preserved food of eel, crab, shrimp, etc.... And we can get a large amount of vegetables for free by delivering to farmers. In spring I can get horsetail on field.
If only I have rice, it's no problem for food.
By the way I didn't talk about location rich in nature.
My university is in Tokyo. What I talk is all in Tokyo.
I've lived in city with such life style.
Fufu, ware you surprised, right?
Get and create things in some way.
Think how to get.
I'm such person since many years ago and I think this mind is a part growing me.
Now it's my utmost character and advantage.
When problem happens, you can see a person well who is just embarrassed and won't to find solution.
It's cause that the world became too convenient and he is used to be given.
----Continued to the second half----
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This content violates our Community Guidelines.January 24, 2017
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This content violates our Community Guidelines.January 24, 2017
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plz correct christmas message!
Ho! Ho! Ho! Dear ○○
Merry christmas!
Were you suprised at my sudden visit?
I have watched you for long time and I know you have been good boy. So I brought what you would like to have.
Cherish your family and be good boy.
I'm looking forward to see you next christmas too!
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
Ho! Ho! Ho!
From your Santa Claus
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Please correct my English
Please correct my company's answer phone.
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Thank you for calling.
Our reception time for new customer is from 11 am to 7 pm on Monday and Friday.
Please leave a message after the tone.
I'll get back to you as soon as possible.
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Please correct my English 2
I will make community of Language Exchange in Japan, Yokohama.
So I wanna make an explanation of this community.
Please correct.
【Language Exchange Group in Yokohama and Atsugi】
DATE:Every Sat or Sun
COST:Y500
PLACE:AMYU ATSUGI or somewhere in YOKOHAMA
http://www.amyu-atsugi.jp/access/index.html
Hi! I'm Atsushi Horie.
I made Language Exchange community.
We act on every Sat or Sun at Yokohama or Atsugi.
If you want to get our info,
please join our FaceBook group.
thanks!
FB Group:https://www.facebook.com/groups/433187136871356/
My FB account:https://www.facebook.com/atsushi.horie.10
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Please correct my English.
I will make community of Language Exchange in Japan, Yokohama.
So I wanna make an explanation of this community.
Please correct.
【About this group】
DATE: Every Sat or Sun
COST:Y500
PLACE: AMYU ATSUGI or somewhere in YOKOHAMA
http://www.amyu-atsugi.jp/access/index.html
A language exchange is two or more people who speak different languages practicing each other's language.
We relies on ensuring the students have fun and are relaxed.
・Don't be shy. Take it easy if your grammer is not good.
・You'll speak in group between 2 and 4 people.
・Half the time, you will be speaking in the language you're practicing, and half the time in your own language
・We provide some subjects for talking.
・If there will be only Japanese, we hold and talk in English.
※We will hold this first meeting in january.
【このグループについて】
開催日:毎週土曜または日曜
参加費:500円
会場:アミュー厚木(横浜の公共施設でもやるかも)
Language Exchange。直訳で言語交換。
お互いに自分が得意とする言語を教え合い、
上達させることを目的とした集まりです!
基本的には、リラックスして会話を楽しむことに主眼をおきます。
・Don't be shy! 英語が上手でなくても気楽に話しましょう
・2〜4人の班で話します
・日本語タイムと英語タイムを半分ずつ設けます
・こちらで複数の会話テーマを用意しています
・外国人がいない場合、日本人のみで英語のディスカッションをします
※第一回は1月に開催する予定です!
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