my covering letter
First of all, I would want to know if my first design of a covering letter is good and I would want to get a feedback from an expert here.
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Dear Sir,
I am writing to enquire if you have any vacancies in your company. I enclose my CV for your information.
With a degree in Business Administration at the Universidad de Granada and past experience both in the corporate world, I am confident career goals can be a plus. Additionally, I have done a Masters of International Business at ESIC (EIG).
Also I am a very analytical, ambitious and highly cooperative. I want to remark my international profile for being the basis of communication and crossâcultural understanding, essential skills to work in a global and diverse environment with culturally heterogeneous teams.
Furthermore, I consider myself as a hard-working candidate; I am passionate about sports business and finance. If you want to meet more about myself, visit my blog germanintheworld.blogspot.com
Yours sincerely,"""
So, what is your opinion?
Thank you