Kann mir jemand diesen Text korrigieren? ☺️ Soft Drinks – hard facts Should German schools be allowed to offer soft drinks? Many teenagers drink soft drinks and buy them at school.- why not? In my opinion, German schools should be allowed to offer soft drinks. Let me explain to you why I think so. First it is fact that if Students want Soda and can not buy them at school they bring along soft drinks from their home. Second it can not denied that soft drinks are unhealthy and can't quench your thirst. Finally everyone can decide at them one if they buy Soda ore not. Könnt ihr mir noch mehr Tipps geben wie ich einen 'comment' schreibe?