Unforgetable experience On a Saturday night in Duc Trong Town, I had an unforgettable experience that stays fresh in my memory all the time. At first, my friends and I just wanted to go around and appreciate passionately the beautiful sky which was decorated by the twinkle of stars. But later we decided to go further, kept talking, we ignored the most important thing – a big dark forest in front of us. Unfortunately, we went into the forest and got lost. When we realized that, it was too late to finad the original way to come back to my uncle’s house. I was so worried that I just grasped my friend’s hand firmly and found that the cold strong wind blowing and whispering through the trees severely. Quickly, terrible fear came to my mind and made me tremble out of my control. I was so scared of dying and the only thought in my brain was the end of my life. It was impossible for me to get out of the forest even though my friends tried to convince me that nothing would happen to us and I was finally safe and sound. However, it was very hard to find the way because of the dense fog and we didn’t know which step to follow. Suddenly a man with a bright torch stood in front of us and we felt very frightened and unable to speak from fear of him. We didn’t dared to open eyes until he gently told us he was a forest warden and would help us to go back. It was he who encouraged us not to worry and ended the awful feeling of getting lost. We felt very lucky, and up to now, it has been still such an unforgettable memory in my youth.

Describe my mother My mother has a special beauty that I like so much. She has a well-shaped body although she eats 5 times a day. Her height is as tall as me – 1m50 but heavier than me. My mother’s hair is wavy and smooth. It’s cut in a bob to make her younger and she also has a short fringe, where it is cut horizontally across her forehead. However, I find she is not young anymore because there are some fine wrinkles on her soft white face. Her eyes are very difficult to describe, sometimes I feel like her sunken eyes expressing the deep sadness but sometimes they blaze like scarlet coals. She always tells me that she hates her nose because it is very extremely broad and fleshy, but she is lucky to have even teeth. In addition, her red cherry cheeks together with her soft lips like blossom in spring always wear a wonderful smile that make other people have to pay attention on her excitedly. Although she sometimes complains about her face because she thinks it is very ugly, I still like her beauty, not like anyone that I have ever met in my life.

Describe a bedroom. Again please help me to check my mistake My bedroom is the best well-ordered place in my house. The size of my room is about 4x4 m, it is not too big but it is enough for me. In the right side of my room there is a big gray frame of picture of my family hung on the wall. Under it is an amazing bed which has a magical white canopy. Also, on the bed, there is a velvety pink coverlet that is full with stunning pillows and teddy bears. Beside my bed, you can see a big window with a simple violet color curtain that looks so luxurious, and from the window, I can feel the wind blowing with the beautiful morning sunlight making my room become perfect like my little heaven. In the left corner, there is a simple white desk with a brown chair. I keep my study books and equipment for studying in drawers next to the desk. Above my desk, I hang a small board with positive posts, so it helps me have an optimistic feeling. My bedroom is combination of attractive colors which are mixed perfectly and it shows the girlie room. It is also completed with some artificial flowers near the window that decorate my room beautifully. In conclusion, all things in my bedroom are put at the right place to make a clean and calm feeling and I like my small heaven so much.

Introduce a hotel in your local area. Please help me to correct my mistakes. Situated in Vietnam's beautiful central highlands, Dalat Hotel Du Parc is a pleasant 10-minute walk to the popular and enjoyable town of Da Lat. The building was originally constructed in 1932, converted in 1995, and still manages to retain most of its charming original French colonial design. The hotel was graced with elegant décor, high ceilings, reverent wooden floors, that have recorded the stays and paused steps of the noble and illustrious travelers. DaLat hotel Du Parc has a total of 144 guestrooms completely with comfortable furnishings, a large bathroom, and modern amenities such as cable TV, Wi Fi high-speed internet access. Depending on client’s needs, they could choose a spacious standard room or upgrade to a superior rooms or suites rooms which are designed to make them feel like at home and nestle quietly over the delightful views of Tran Phu Street or hills views. The hotel houses a delicious and authentic Vietnamese restaurant located on the terrace area. There are also the Le Cafe de La Poste which has been remodeled for a Bakery, Coffee Shop and a unique place for High Tea Afternoons and The Le Bistro with classical and elegant style offers a perfect venue for intimate meals, highlighting French, Western cuisine with the finest and freshest Da Lat’s product. To have a de luxe entertain, Le Select Bar perfectly located on the main lobby is an ideal place to conduct a discrete meeting or host a friendly get-together. Moreover, on the ground floor of Du Parc Hotel Dalat is the great location for the great reason: indulging yourself in complete relaxation and retrieve Well-Being as a result of the benefits of our soothing massage. Currency exchanges and car rentals can be done at the tour desk and free parking is available. In conclusion, The Du Parc Hotel Dalat is the wonderful ideal resting place for leisure visitors to this alpine destinations city. As many as guests can be accommodated in comfort and luxury bedrooms, enjoy stylish and practical meeting rooms alongside the superior leisure facilities makes Du Parc Hotel Dalat become one of the most famous hotels in Dalat City

Describing my dog I am always greeted by a beautiful friend, Steal - my dog when I come back home. She is a lovely Japanese breed and very popular over the world. Steal has a fluffy brown color that has a few white spots spread across her body and tail. She is just about 2 feet, so every time she walks, she will fall down and her stomach will quite touch the ground .She has two small long ears always hung downwards. Three strands of hair standing straight up on Steal’s head make her look very funny. Her two bright round black eyes outlined with thin black lashes are as deep as an ocean. She has a small nose with a big black dot on it. She uses her long tongue to lick and wags her tail whenever she want to shows love to others. Adding to her cute look, Steal is very active and likes to go out for a walk with me. After hard and serious studying at university, I feel very pleased because that pretty dog is always very delighted and often barks excitingly to welcome me to home.

Please help me to check them. Paraphrasing is my important problems =( 1. Sloppy people carry in their mind’s eye a heavenly vision, a precise plan that is so stupendous, so perfect, it can’t be achieved in this world or the next. --> Sloppy people imagine a fantastic vision; an accurate, fabulous and perfect plan that can’t be reached in this world or the next 2. Sloppy people can’t bear to part with anything. They give loving attention to every detail. When sloppy people say they’re going to tackle the surface of a desk, they really mean it. --> Sloppy people can’t stand separating with anything and love paying attention to every detail. When sloppy people say they’re going to consider the surface of a desk, they really mean it. 3. Neat people are bums and clods at heart. They have cavalier attitudes toward possession, including family heirlooms. Everything is just another dust catcher to them. If anything collects dust, it’s got to go and that’s that. Neat people will toy with the idea of throwing the children out of the house just to cut down on the clutter. --> Neat people are very homely, simple and have abandon views about property, including family heritage. To them, everything is just another dirt catcher and if anything gets dirt, it will go and that is so natural. Neat people will also have a funny idea of letting the children out of the house just to clean the mess.

Feeling lonely Sometimes in my life, i feel so bad. Everybody seems not to see me, they irogned me or they are angry with me. My parents were divorced 7 years ago. Before breaking up, My father didnot take any responsiblities to us. He just drank and hit us day by day. My mother is caring and kind. She sacrified all things. But he didnot care... now, my life is better . But many things make me feel tired .. i really need something...

the beauty of Da Lat ?Are you seeking for a peaceful space, poetic landscape where your mind will be free from life burdens and worries? Then, you are invited to Dalat, the city of fog and mysteries... It's my hometown ^^ there are many beautiful sights.. in the morningm if you wake up early, go along the Xuan Huong lake, enjoy the fresh air. .People who have ever been ther won't forget the sights in Dalat. Dalat is famous for pine hills, waterfalls and flowers with various colors and of different kinds.Besides Than Tho Lake in Dalat is quiet and gentle. It takes tourists several days to go sightseeing at all the waterfalls in the area.Only 3 kilometers from the town center, there is a famous Cam Ly falls. Around the Prenn falls is the valley of various flowers and pine hills. Lovers can walk in Love Valley to enjoy beautiful and poetic sights... Go to Da Lat and I can be your tour guide ^^