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My birthday My first birthday party was when I was 18 years old. It was a very special day. My brother and his friends organized the birthday party for me in the karaoke room. On that day, I prepared to go to my bed at 10 p.m. But my brother called me and said “I would pick you up to sing karaoke with my friends”. After reaching karaoke bar, we entered a room and all his friends were inside with many balloons and candles. They sang loudly in one voice “Happy birthday to you”. I was really surprised and happy. Then I blew candles and cut my birthday cake. They congratulated and gave very beautiful presents to me like necklace, bag and dress. Later, we ate many delicious foods made by my brother’s girlfriend. Then we sang and danced together. At that time, everybody was wonderful and cute. When the party ended I said thanks so much and said goodbye to my brother and his friends. Probably, I could never forget that birthday because it was the first birthday celebration in my life.
November 28, 2017
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Floating market Two years ago, on the national holiday, my friends and I went to Can Tho province which is located in the south in Vietnam. There is a famous floating market, which name is Cai Rang. I was really impressed with floating market on the river there. Fortunately, we arrived at this destination in the morning because this is the time beginning of floating market, then we rented a small boat to come there. I asked a boatman “why calling Cai Rang floating market”. He answered “The name Cai Rang is a long story of a big crocodile. The floating market is specialized for exchanging, buying and selling goods, fruits, etc. by boats on the river. The time of market begins from 4 a.m. to 10 a.m.”. When we reached there, to be honest, the scenery attracted to me a lot especially like the small grocery stores on the boats, some the boats containing many fruits or vegetables and the restaurants on the water. Our boat was running, suddenly, having a small boat came near for selling coffee, cake, breakfast food etc. another boat sold mangoes and watermelons. We felt it really interesting. Cai Rang floating market was very idyllically and specially. Actually, this holiday gave me a chance to relax. Therefore, I hope that we will be able to have more holidays like this every year.
October 15, 2017
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Study In my country, the education system is divided four levels. It includes as follows: primary education of 5 years, secondary school of 4 years, high school of 3 years and university. Each level left a lot of impression on me. But only the memories at university which never make me forget. I register at university with major garment technology. Probably, I really enjoy this time, when most of things became newly with me as switching to a new place, having new friends, a new school, and a new life. I would have many chances to challenge myself. The higher education was difficult than high school. With subjects such as economics, specialize subjects, English, etc. in side I attended some club skills, volunteer activities to creating relationships and developing life skills. With 2 semesters of freshman were very easy with me. But until last semesters became very difficult to complete due to make graduation thesis. Besides, I must sew two garments to complete the final semester. Eventually, I was fulfilling 4 years at university. It was not too difficult and not also easy. pls help me
September 30, 2017
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PLEASE HELP CORRECT MY TEST Celebrity Who is your favorite celebrity in the world and in Vietnam? With me, regarding music, when I was a child I just knew two stars of Vietnam is Dan Truong, Cam Ly. They really have convinced not only me even so all adorer by vocal skills, the voices, and lyrical songs. Until now, I still adore them and some other celebrated singers like Khoi My, Truc Nhan. Sometimes, I only wish I could meet and obtain signatures from them. About foreign celebrities, I adore Taylor Swift, Shayne Ward, Westlife group. Their albums are very fantastic by performance skills, voice sings, technology video, etc. I even created a special playlist on my phone to listen to whenever I want. Whereas with films, I remember when I studied in high school. I really adored Lam Chi Dinh who is an actor in Chinese. I knew him from a film “my lucky star”. I am a crazy fan of him. I bought many his picture and I posted theirs on the wall, bag pack, notebook, anywhere I like. Because he is very handsome. I also interested personal life of him such as his love, family, etc. on the social networking, But currently, I don’t adore any actors.
September 24, 2017
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Childhood memories My childhood is nice celebrates. With flying the kites in the afternoon, the noon-summers without sleep to go to pick fruits together. Trips visiting grandparents by bicycle, etc. Beside sad celebrates influence on me. I remember as when I studied grade seventh. My family was very poor, we didn’t have enough money to pay anything in life. Especially, my first brother needed much money to study at the University in HCM, so my parents left our hometown to come to work a big city. That is Ho Chi Minh City. And I must live with my second brother. Our life lacked everything, no enough money to buy the books, buy food, pay electronic etc. Because my parents just sent about 500VND for us per month. We knew their try to work to improve life better than before. Sometimes, I cried because I miss and love them. After two years my second brother also went to HCM to study. My life was getting worse when I lived alone. everything around me became to fear at night ghost, thief, etc. But then everything was fine when my first older brother graduated. He worked and helped my family improve in life. This story childhood leaves deep impression and lessons for me. About taking care of myself, or pass a fear and make me more mature. Help correct the story. Many thanks~
September 16, 2017
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Help me correct the text This is the first my feeling about idyllic life in the countryside. I was born and grown in the small province of Vietnam. My house is near the sea. It isn’t beautiful but it always brings comfort and happiness to us. Roosters Crowing in the Morning begins the new day. The dawn of sun gradually appeared from east of the sea. It seems people waked up to prepare for a new day. Each person a job, the farmers go out to the fields, the workers go to factories, and the students go to school etc. You will see something special when standing on the beach. You will see the fishermen start dropping the nets, some boats are floating on the sea, and the waves pat gently by winds. It looks like a beautiful picture of the morning. The life here didn’t like the life of city, everything takes place very simply and slowly. The small market just has some traders but they are very happy and friendly. The foods here are very fresh and cheap. I love idyllic life here. If you come here, you love it same me.
September 10, 2017
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Idyllic life. Today is the first day of September. It’s raining! Probably this is the first raindrops of season autumn. It seems that peoples are preparing for a long holiday as: Some people visit their hometowns, some people like traveling, some people just prefer to stay at home sleeping etc. My friendlies will prepare for their upcoming wedding. And I sit here feeling the ordinary life of this city. I like rains at the end of the day. It cleans the dirt on the road and it seems to melt everyone’s weariness. I rent the home near a large hospital, sometimes, the sound of an ambulance is still ringing up on the road. And the church bells remind people who go to church at the weekend ”. Sunsets are gradually covering on all roads to finish a day. I feel the scent of dinner from neighbor flying to. Just that's all. Everything is just very simply and it was called the idyllic life. PLEASE HELP ME TO CORRECT IT
September 1, 2017
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Help me correct the text Mobile phones harmful your health Are smartphones harmful to your health? The smartphones help people contact easier together. If abuse smartphone too much which will cause dangerous for health. Four dangerous often meet when using smartphone many hours as: 1. Eye problem. Most of the people usually use the smartphone in environment lack of light or before bedtime. On the others hands, the small screen and mini text make eye strain. In long run, the eyes will be myopic and eye disease. 2. Insomnia. Follow studies show that screen of smartphones will spawn the green lights to see clearly in the daytime, but it harms at night. These green lights will hinder the process creating hormone drowsiness of body lead to insomnia. 3. Neck pain and back pain. While you use phone your head tilts forward for a long time that it will pressure your spine, causing pain back, neck pain and shoulder. 4. Stress. Using mobile phones frequently with high levels can increase stress by the constant bell, vibrating alert, and reminder. Will increase the risk of depression. In short, limit using the mobile phone to protect your health.
August 26, 2017
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CLEAN FOOD Most webs explain clean food : Firstly, it has clearly origin, label, date of manufacture and expiry date. Secondly, for the vegetables don’t use any plant protection drugs and for the meats don’t use growth substances. Thirdly, all food processing facilities must reassure food hygiene safety. However, the information above just was the theory. Because of most people like to buy cheap foods. Moreover, they often buy some fresh foods rather than ordinary foods. For this reason, many farmers often use growth drugs for vegetables, fruits, animal, etc. to bring more profit. Especially, Chinese foods poured very much into Vietnam. Because it is fresh and cheaper than Vietnamese foods. According to statistics in Vietnam: per years 2,2 million people die by dirty food. And cancer stands second in the world. In short, we should protect ourselves such as planted vegetables at home, buying clean foods in the supermarket, or never eat food outside.
August 18, 2017
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My English Actually, i don't understand why my English is bad. I try to improve it many times. After i finish in company i went to school seft-study 2 hours per day, but i don't feel to develop it. I am depressing and i don't know what now ? I readly need person teacher can help me everyday. WHO can help me? English is dream. Please help me to give a advices English. thanks a lot ~
April 7, 2016
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