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The birth of fingerprinting and the criminal case it was 1st used for PART 1
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A fingerprint commonly refers to the impression left by the friction ridges of a human finger. The recovery of fingerprints from a crime scene is an important method of forensic science and DNA profilng.Since it was invented, fingerprinting was used to unvail mysterious murders and find their culprits. On June 7th, the newspaper “the guardian” published an article remembering the first criminal case solved by means of fingerprinting, which was invented by accident in Leichster by the genitisist Alec Jeffreys exactly 30 years ago.
Dawn Ashworth was 15th years old when, on the walk home from a friend’s house living in a neighbour village, she was attacked and killed. The pathologist assessed that she put up considerable struggle before being raped and strangled. Right after Dawn’s body was found the police was quick to associate her case to another murder that had accurred a couple of years earlier: Lynda Mann’s circumstances of death were replicas of the 15th years old’s.
The technique known as DNA fingerprinting was employed in a criminal investigation for the first time. Jeffrey discovered it stumbling on a failed experiment: he had DNA extracted from cells for the purpose of studying hereditary illnesses. In the process he had left the DNA attached to a photographic film that was left on a photografic developing container. Jeffrey discovered the extracted film showed different sequences of bars for each cell- with every cell belonging to a different patient- that was used. The technique was able to determine kinship and presumably whose DNA blood and other samples found on a crime scene beloged to.
Indeed, The method was able to set free the major suspect for Dawn and Lynda’s deaths. The 17 years old J. Buckland, a boy with learning diffculties who had confessed Dawn’s but not Lynda’s murder, had actually killed none.
The hunt for the 2 girls’ murderer resumed stronger than ever and months later reulted in inviting all the men who lived or had lived and worked in the area between 1984 and 1986 to get tested by means of fingerprinting. Over 5000 blood samples were analysed but surprisingly no one matched the DNA of the blood or sperm found on the victim. That was until one man’s confession in a pub turned the tables.
to be continued in PART 2
bibliography:
https://www.theguardian.com/uk-news/2016/jun/07/killer-dna-evidence-genetic-profiling-criminal-investigation
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The birth of fingerprinting and the criminal case it was 1st used for PART 2
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One year after Dawn’s murder, a man named Kelly was having a pint when he confessed that he had impersonated a friend and took the blood test on his behalf, explaining that named friend had asked for this favour because he had already taken the test for another fellow, who was struggling with conviction. Kelly’s friend, a baker called Pitchfork, back when the investingations had been just freshly started, had declared he was with his children at the hour Dawn was killed. Pitchfork had doctored his own passport and inserted Kelly’s photo only to drive him to the test centre and wait outside until it was done.
Rumor spread and quickly reached the police that promptly arrested both Kelly and Pitcfork.
After DNA testing proved him guilt of both murders, Pitchfork was asked “why Dawn Ashworth?”. He simply shrugged and answered “Opportunity. She was there and I was there”. He was condamned to prison for a minimum of 30 years, which will expire next year.
Three decades since DNA fingerprinting was first used in forensics we now have online databases, that replaced the DNA drag-nets in order to keep the files in order and easy to recover quickly.
The 1st database was created in UK in 1995. Since 2012 it is sanctioned by law that the files belonging to people that were afterwards found innocent must be erased from these databases.
bibliography:
https://www.theguardian.com/uk-news/2016/jun/07/killer-dna-evidence-genetic-profiling-criminal-investigation
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Writing Paper Part 2 (CAE). Task Type: letter of Application
Question
You have read the following information from a British university, and have decided to apply for a course:
The university welcomes applications to all its courses from overseas students. Please write to the Admissions Officer giving details of the course you wish to apply for and why. Your letter should include an outline of your qualifications and any other relevant information.
Write your letter of application to the Admissions Officer (Between 220-260 words).
To whom it may concern,
I am currently a 5th year student at the Aldo Moro School of medicine at the University of Bari, Italy. Please accept this document, as an application for the practice course of 8 weeks in plastic surgery, beginning August 2017 at the Manchester University Hospital .
I would like to take part in this professional course because I believe it would help provide a solid base for future endeavors in my career. I would consider it privilege to do so at the medical school of Manchester, because it would give me the rare opportunity to learn in a high quality rank univeristy, as well as in the English-speaking country par excellence .
I hold in very highly regard surgical care because of its dependence on team work, which is an environment I thrive in. I’m particularly interested in plastic surgery due to the wide range of extremely interesting work prospects it can offer. In fact, plastic surgery is used not only to perform cosmetic corrections, but also to restore one's appearance after an unfortunate accident or illness, providing vast improvements in patients’ self esteem and overall quality of life.
I would greatly appreciate the opportunity to to gain the valuable knowledges your world class surgical staff will provide during simulation classes, rounds and in the operation theatre.
In addition, I am sending copies of the certificates and tutors' references I gained during my previous elective periods in Brazil and Romania, hoping they will be proof enough I possess the qualities to be a valuable member of this program.
I thank you in advance for your consideration and look forward to meeting with you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Milena S********i
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Writing Paper Part 2 (CAE). Task Type: Review
I would appreciate corrections on both grammar and form. I'm not sure how to write a good review and werther I was off track or not...
Question
You have seen the following announcement in your local arts magazine:
PERFORMANCE OF THE YEAR
What has been the best performance this year in your local area? It could be a concert or a stage play, or perhaps an art or craft exhibition. You can make your nomination by sending us a review of what you have seen, telling us why you think it was the most outstanding performance of the year...
Write the review. (Around 220-260 words).
I rememeber the first time I got ice cream as a child. After eating my watermelon cone I felt blissed and ready for bis. I got the exact same feeling exiting the theater that hosted the Lançamento Jazz e Blues Festival in Bari yesterday night.
Ten veteran artists played in a beautiful succession, provinding two hours of pure entertainment and enchanting atmosphere.
Before going through the details of the astounding performance, some background is needed: the group is all composed by Brazilian drifters, who share a true passion for either Blues or Jazz, with both genres being born in the United states between the 19th and 20th century. According to the pamphlet we were given in the auditorium, some of the members were recruited from the streets of Rio de Janeiro and Sao Paolo, where they played dayily before becoming a part of this talented musical body.
Clariano Soares and his crew delighted the audience alternating rythmical and fast-paced tunes with slow and emotional themes, causing some tear-jerking moments and overall making every cent spent on the quite expensive ticket count.
Indeed, the price of the ticket, along with the lack of popularity of these genres in our area, may be the main reason why the theatre was not sold out.
Nevertheless, after yesterday’s performance a lady here can only hope for more people to get close to the genres and that next time the event will obtain both the numbers and enthusiasm that it certainly deserves.
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IELTS: Writing Paper Part 2. Task Type: Letter to an Editor
Since I'm studying on my own, if possible, can anyone correct/explain mistakes or suggest more valid alternatives? Thank you in advance!
Question
You are reading your favourite newspaper and you come across a letter which attacks the education system in your country (or a country that you know well).
...What a pity our school system is so out-of- date. I would suggest that some major educational reforms are needed!
Yours sincerely
Prof Collins
To give YOUR view contact the editor by writing to XXXXX
Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper giving your response to Prof. Collins' letter (Between 220-260 words).
To whom it may concern,
I am a avid reader of this newspaper and after coming accross Professor Collin’s letter I immediately started to jot down a reply.
The lack of full-equipped laboratories in most italian schools sadly is a reality I do agree we should change. Increasing funds for computers and other equipments that would let students learn faster and more efficiently is a foward-looking measure to invest in our country future source of income.
I am also aware of how averagely poor the english knowledge of our young men and women is. I would never put stock in a country that is incapable of managing international meetings, lest being ridiculed worldwide for the way it conveys the message .The problem is partly related to the fact that, in pubblic schools, we seldomly hire native english speaking teachers. Instead, we prefer italian natives who , at best, studied languages and spent some time abroad. Having two or three native english lecturers per school would definitely improve the situation.
Lastly, I would like to point out that we would never get free of our “out-of date system” if it is primary composed by “out-of-date mentors”. Since the retirement age has been increased and stable positions narrowed to an handful, younger teachers work in precarious positions for most of their carreers.
Although experience is an essetial aspect of being a teacher, I think young minds and ideas are key to freshen up and give balance to an education system that aspires for both quality and innovation.
I hope my letter will give readers stimulus for reflection and the courage to offer their own ideas.
Yours sincerely
Milena S.
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Academic IELTS Writing task
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graphs below.
Two graphs couple the research fundings for 6 different diseases in Someland with the mortality rate of each of those pathologies in 1990. It is ouright clear that the fundings are not necessarly scaled to death rate.
Although AIDS death rate is by 1 million lower than tubercolosis, the fundings invested for the former highly outdo the ones for the latter. Also leprosy and tropical diseases brought few deaths to Someland and yet place 2nd an 3rd in terms of fundings. The only diseases that rather match their research fundings are diarrhoea and malaria, whose mortality rate loomed half a milion deaths in 1990.
In conclusion it stands to reason that funding allocated for disease research in Someland is not entirely determined by the number of deaths, at least the ones occurring in any single year.
May 26, 2015
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