could you fix my wrong in a sentence? (about austraila ) Australia is one of the most multicultural places in the world. I think this is one of the most perfect countries to spend time in. Firstly, I would like to visit the capital city of New South Wales, Sydney as it has had the longest history in Australia. I think I would be able to experience new things and interact with different cultures. Secondly, I would like to meet many people, especially my friend, 민지 who lives in Sydney. Finally, I would like to visit Australia is because of its beautiful environment, well-structured government, peacefulness and most of all, because I think Australians living there are very kind. Specifically, my overall plan is that I’m going to stay there for two nights and three days, doing sightseeing and enjoying my time with other people in Sydney. Though it might be a short period of time, I think I will learn a lot. Also, I’m planning to focus mainly on the Sydney metropolitan area as shown in my itinerary below.

Is there anybody you could fix my mistakes?:0 my goal for the new semester is to read more books. I made up my mind getting to know much more to achieve my dream someday. That's way I need to improve refinement. To read more books, im going to the library often. I will be able to know and learn about what I didn't know second, I will acces e-books. By doing so, I can have more time that I can read books and e-books are easy to carry. in addition i can save millions of trees by using e-books. I believe going to the library often and accessing e-books will hep me reach my goal.