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essay(plz correct~thanks~)
Undoubtedly,the tempo of life is improving at an alarming rate .It seems that individuals prefer like choose the more fast and convenient ways to acquire the knowledge in current society.Some people even support that we should use the computer instead of the museum and galleries.I will frown if those infrastructure be replaced by internet.
It might be a general social tendency,people like stay at home just click the website then their could absorb what their want. Indeed, internet is strong ,it was including a variety of timely information ,vivid pictures as well as abundant attachments,which was really meet the mass taste.However,with time accumulating people will rely on the computer intensify.They will lose interested to go out and exploring this world because all the information is hands-down .That was not a good tendency in modern life.
By contrast,the public museum and art galleries not only show the exquisite objects and works of art in our sight ,but also those each one full the historical experience.It was the symbol of culture.To be more specific,the charm of museum and galleries lies in the fact that people appreciate it in a close approach.People must let themselves on that surrounding to understand the historical background or even touch them,then they could feel the art and historical atmosphere .
Moreover,the different museum and galleries record the various kinds of cities and countries memories.Those memories is unique that could not be replace by computer.Such as if you want to know about China,you will satisfy just skim the picture online?The answer is not.Because the shimmery and brilliant cultures scatter in a variety of museum ,art galleries and libraries.
All in all,in my opinion,I suppose the public facilities could not be replaced.Furthermore, the government should protect it .
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Describe my yesterday
Yesterday is New Year's Eve.
My parents and i got up early in order to cleaned the room.After that we dressed up new clothes went out to visited my grandpa and relatives.I though i can not receive the "lucky money" because i over that age.But i got it~my mom given me bonus with 600RMB inside when we backed home.That was a surprised~but i asked my pa added me 50 coz i want to get the 6.5 score in ielts~~hhh~
Yesterday my mom cooked a delicious food~I don not how to describe it for u~The cooking process like:boil the sweet wine ,red beans and glutinous rice pellets~that was my favorite food,we call it '赤豆(red bean)酒酿(fermented glutinous rice?maybe translate like that…i dont sure that)'
In the midnight,around 12 o'clock the firecrackers fulled of my community! such a noisy.In that time,i thought i stayed at the battlefield...
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Today i want to write something without dictionary!!
Emm,today is an meaningful day~we call it The Spring Festival.
Actually,i have heard firecrachers voice in my community~
In this day,people will dress up in their best clothes and visit relatives.Children will receive some bonus(we call it "lucky money")from the relatives and elders.But in my age,i couldnt receive it!! coz i am not a child (ToT)
I will sweep the tomb in afternoon,that was our country custom,we also call it "obeisance ancestry".
when the evening ,the family member will accompany together and have an reunion dinner in New Year’s Eve.
My parents prepare various kinds of food!
After dinner,most of chinese will open television focus on CCTV1 to appreciate the live "Spring Festival Gala"
but as young adult like me,i am not very interesting in it ,so i prefer choose chat with my friend or just read a book.
thats all~ plz correct it~~~thanks a lot~新年快乐!
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