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TOEFL Essay. A person should never make an important decision alone. There is no double that we need to make lots of decisions in our life, but how to make a decision is very difficult. Some people prefer to hear the opinion of others, and some people think they should make a decision by themselves. I think we should be good at listening to the other people opinion when we want to make an important decision.There are lots of reasons for my point of view, First of all, different people might have different opinions. Thus, in order to make the right choice people should discuss every possible decision and give their own idea. As we know, everyone is limited in his energy, it is impossible to do every thing all by ourselves. So sometimes we might need some experiences or knowledge. If we can discuss with other people, it can make this decision become more perfect. For example,  teenagers are too young to make any important decision because they are not mature enough yet.  If they have to make an important, it might be wrong. Therefore, they need to ask their parents for helping. Second, a good manager who listen to everyone’s opinion. For example, the manager should listen to customer’s advice and then they can make decisions clearly. In china, emperors had boundless power in ancient society. Emperor worried that the higher officials shares his authority and threatens his status. They prefer made an important decision by themselves. However, they might make some wrong decisions, it leaded dynasty was destroyed. Li Shimin, who was one of the greatest emperors in Chinese history. The emperor was known he would listen to his minster and then made a decision. Finally, I think that a person should consult with his friends or parents when making an important decision to avoid possible mistakes.
June 22, 2015
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life today is easier an more comfortable than it was when your grandparent Life is changing, and the past doesn’t equal the future. We are at an exciting time in history, and life as we know it is about to good change. On of the most important is that technology has had a profound positive effect on  people’s lives. Technology is extending and it has significantly changed different aspects of life. Thus, I agree with that life today is easier and more convenient than before. First of all, the web, social media and virtually, each of these has or is changing our lives. It makes our life become more convenient and interesting. For example, we can send a message to our friend, it just cost about 1minute. However, in past, people have to write a letter to talk with others, which costs about 1 month. For instance, I have heard from my grandma that it is difficult to connect with people who is far from.She even can not imagine people can chat in the internet from different country. Moreover, people can eliminate the boring feeling through network, in contrast, my grandparents don’t have so many kinds of entertainment. Thus, new technology makes life more convenient. In addition, with the economy has maintained a rapid development, and our living standard have been improved remarkably. For example, people can earn more money than before, thus they have enough money to improve their health. People now are paying more attention to the importance of a healthy diet and active life, and with the development of the medical service, the great number of people can get this service; it can address communities’ public health, and improve the quality of life. Finally, the development of the automobile made transportation even easier and faster. In addition, the invention of the airplane is a milestone in mankind’s history. It revolutionized the way of travel and commerce. With the new transportation appear, it makes our life easier and more convenient. It is hard to imagine in the past, because when our grandparents were children, they had to walk the whole day. Moreover,we can take train or airplane to find our friends easily than before. Overall, life today also face many problems that they can`t meet in old time. However, compare with the benefits, it makes our life easier.
May 31, 2015
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TOEFL essay The writer stated the benefits of hydropower facilities, whereas the speaker pointed out some disadvantages of hydropower facilities. The author states hydropower is extremely convenient and it contributes improve the local economy and quality of life. However, the speaker argues that the hydropower is convenient. When a dam is built on the river, it will cause floods. Thus, people have to move because of the damage. In the meantime, their life will be affected. The speaker mentioned that hydropower is not always an eco-friendly system because if the silt and other debris accumulate over time, it would  produce  toxic chemicals to the river floor. This contrasts with the point in the reading that hydropower doesn't pollute the environment. The speaker stated that hydropower will change a river’s natural function and do harm for the ecosystem. However, the author wrote that hydropower is “ clean and green.” The speaker explained that hydropower will bring a heavy environment cost. On the other hand, water is a renewable source, it depends on weather patterns variation, and thus, it is not a reliable source of fuel. However, the author reported the hydropower is useful because it is effectiveness and inexpensive cost.
May 26, 2015
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This is TOEFL article, who can help me to find grammar mistakes? Thank you!!!!!!!!!! Both the reading and the lecture stated that which is the the first domesticated human grain. The professor argued that beer was the first wheat food not bread. She showed some evidences that prove her opinion was trust. First, the reading stated that wheat need to be ground. However, the professor pointed out wheat can get without grounding because if people put wheat in the moist environment, it's sprouting occurs and it will becomes soft. Second, the article wrote that wheat can be fermented when exposes to environment. But after this sprouting process, fermentation occurs due to the formation of bubbles and foam. It is easy to see this appearance, people taste it and will discover the first beer. Third, the article explained that baking makes food easier to eat and keeps a long period. The professor don’t agree it yet. Early people won’t use fire to make food become better for eating because people did not cook thing.
May 20, 2015
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Personal Statement The hotel management field is an area of endless possibilities that I cannot wait to explore. I really like this major because I like to talk with others and live in a strict order of the management environment. In addition, with the coming of knowledge economy time causes the different characteristic of the customer demand, which has brought the tremendous pressure for the hotel management and development. It needs more high quality talent. I think it is a opportunity for me. Thus, I need to improve myself in some way, shape, or form every single day, and I also believe that it is my responsibility to try and leave this world in a better state than it was when I entered it. For example, to become a well-known figure in the hospitality industry. I hope that I can take a step towards achieving this goal by attending the University of Stout. On the other hand, I know one who is competent and skillful will do with ease in his job, the one who has learned more harder will never fall behind others. Thus, I will learn more and do my best to achieve my goal.
May 13, 2015
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my experience I have gotten practice in Crowne Plaza for a summary vacation. Based on my experiences, hotel operators now focus more on the quality standards in order to meet the basic needs and expectations of the customers. Good service quality will attract more customers, and this will leave him or her with a good impression. For example, I have seen a customer come to hotel several times because he thinks our service is outstanding. It is a nice time staying there, so he loves to come back again. In China, along with rapid economic development, people's living standard enhances. Thus, the strand of service has improved. For Chinese, service is the core sense of the worth of the hotel, and measurement and evaluation of users’ satisfaction indexes are the evaluation on this purpose. Good service quality also will increase customer approval with the loyalty and lead to increase brand recognition in China. In my opinion, first, service is the groundwork of a hotel, with people as the foundation of service. So enhance the training to improve the capability of staff can improve the service quality. Second, provides a variety of services are an important point to improve service quality. Customer will get different services requirements. For example, customers have a strange hobby. Nevertheless, hotel needs to meet the people. Third, if a hotel has a good prestige, it means the hotel has a good service quality. These two factors are influencing each other continuously. Fourth, provide a good facility and environment, and customers will better experience in hotel. For example, in Crowne Plaza, hotel with five different sizes of multipurpose conference room, and equipped with international first- class conference facilities, to meet the different needs of the customer.
April 22, 2015
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My experience I have gotten practice in Crowne Plaza for a summary vacation. Based on my experiences, hotel operators now focus more on the quality standards in order to meet the basic needs and expectations of the customers. Good service quality will attract more customers, and this will leave him or her with a good impression. For example, I have seen a customer come to hotel several times because he thinks our service is outstanding. It is a nice time staying there, so he loves to come back again. The different images of different brands in the customers’ eyes play an important role on choosing and purchasing. For example, there are two different hotels, they are both free, but first hotel has a good brand image, on the contrary, second hotel is bad. There is no double that people will choose the first one. It means consumers tend to give more weight to products and services connected to a strong brand identity. In China, along with rapid economic development, people's living standard enhances. Thus, the strand of service has improved. For Chinese, service is the core sense of the worth of the hotel, and measurement and evaluation of users’ satisfaction indexes are the evaluation on this purpose. Good service quality also will increase customer approval with the loyalty and lead to increase brand recognition in China.
April 22, 2015
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A interesting event This event is the Amazing Stuff: Research in Ice Cream & Candy. This is a lecture, and it is formal and attracts about 90 people. Listen to the lecture requires silence. People were all ears to the speech and take some note. I am interested in ice cream. The lecturers talk about the research in ice cream at begins. However, they change the topic after introducing the ice cream. They tell us the experience about they attend the Amazing Race. In Friday’s season finale, the first team to the mat was Amy and Maya, who won the Race and a million dollars. I think it is incredible because they are not a professional athlete and it needs a great deal of courage to face this activity. They tell us the Race is way more of a mental game that it ever is a physical game. And it needs to stay focused, calm, cool and collected, regardless of how your body may feel at that moment. At last, they give us some suggestions, never give up, never come in last. This event lets me know Madison people also have a spirit of adventure. Through above this lecture, I realize sometimes perseverance does win out and we need to challenge ourselves unceasingly to get on a new step.
April 20, 2015
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basketball game. The event is about the basketball game. Wisconsin VS Kentucky. This is a communication event that we can talk with person who likes basketball. People go to sporting events – to football, basketball, and they are yelling and shouting for their team. In the church, there were about 20 people, we were watching the basketball game, carried live from Indianapolis. This was a very good game, Wisconsin had a bad start. However, they were making adjustments and coming back into the game. They were able to hold on until the end. The final score was 71 to 64, Wisconsin won the game. Frank Kaminsky’s excellent performance enabled Wisconsin to win the match. After game over, full-court seethed, all people excited ground applause. Although this event is casual, I still like it. I like basketball and I am study in Wisconsin, so I support Wisconsin. I am glad to see that they won the game, which they won a night. After this event, it shows Madison’s passionate side and American’s indomitable spirit. In my opinion, life is just like a contest. We can lose an opportunity, can feel burn out, but we cannot lose the passion, cannot lose the spirit of courage, and cannot lose the spirit of never giving up.
April 19, 2015
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This is a happy event This is a happy event “Madison’s Empty bowls” is a communicate event, but this purpose of event is helping the poor people. Empty bowls is an international grassroots effort to fight hunger and was created by The Imagine Render Group. It just cost $15 cash donation for supper and take home a one-of-a-kind-bowl. There are about 60 people go there to talk with each other. The environment is very busy, people all get together to eat and talk, and look very happy. I go to this event because I am interested in how to make a bowl and want to learn about what does American people do in their spare time? I like pottery but I always don’t have time to learn it. So when I fairly this activity here, I am really looking forward to the event. After this event, I get to understand American way of life deeply. In Madison, people enjoy interaction with others in the free time. Everyone slow down and take some time to relax. Going slowly helps to reduce stress, and improve the pleasure of doing things, and keeps you in the present moment. I like a slower life.
April 18, 2015
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