would you correct these sentences please ? Both of my uncle and me are like Pineapple . Now all i have is one Hundred pound . the cat in play is so cute . She likes wear a yellow dress like me . My apartment is wide. but my neighbor's apartment is narrow .

Are these sentences right ? please help . If I drop the exam , my father will punish me . If I bought an expensive home , I would marry now . If you watched bloody movie , you would become cold hearted .

Lunch today My mother invited my sister's husband to have a lunch with , he said that OK , so I walk up early and go to market to buy some meat and vegetables to make lunch . To be honest , I couldn't decide between Minestrone , Peas , Okra and Spinach , in the end i decided to make minestrone and Okra so my mother like it . When I return to the house my sister took the food and making it . she is a good cooker . Finally , my mother said that " lunch will be served in the sun room " , its our favorite room so we ate in . my sister's husband said Thanks for lunch , and for the company :)) Is this paragraph right ? please help .

My girlfriend's engagement four days ago I attended to My girlfriend's party , she called me about characteristic of her groom I felt she love him ,although she didn't say that . The party on Friday " Heba you should to come " she said ,then I called my other friends to make sure if they are getting ready to attend , they told , Ok ,, we are coming certainly . The party was wonderful . when the bride entered to the hotel ballroom , music band plays pop music in the first then played romantic music which a very nice music . I like it . the groom and the bride were dancing as a bright face , and we danced with . Hotel was serving some food , cake , little Pizza and Juice . because the time was late we wanted to go but mother of bride refused , we waited a while then we saluted and go .

My favorite coffee shop My favorite place is a coffee shop close to our house . I like to go there in my free time with my friends , It's my favorite place because they have a very nice coffee and sweet , sometimes I go there because I like the coffee and it's so nice place which I can meeting my friends there . is this paragraph right ? please help .

Are sentences right , please? When I sat next to a sea I feel that stair way to heaven . Hobbies is regular activity help me to improve my live, It is an instrument to enjoy the time . My high school Prom is gorgeous . I would have a photo but I can't . Ahmed said he would eat a Pasta . let's go with him . I have to register in beginner's ballroom class before it is completed .

In the grandmother's house Of ten years a go we was used to travel to my grandmother , she was living in Luxor ,this city was far twelve hours from my city . It is located in the farthest south of Egypt , and we used to visit her after the end of the school year . I adore the details of childhood with my grandfather and grandmother .they are so kind , friendly and fun . My grandfather was a farmer . he used to plant most of vegetables that we need it , then My grandmother was cooking . Because of the temperature was very high , My mother was refusing If I asked her to go with My grandfather's farm , so I was replacing it to play with my cousin .although my grandfather and mother were die but i'm in love with those memories . Grandma's house will remain the greatest house all the time .

power of Morning i often hear about benefits of getting up early , my mother always talk about what the importance of working early , but i'm a night person always to finish all my work in the night , what the different between finishing the work in the night or morning ??! . so i experimented to get up early and see what is the different ... My mother was right , sleeping at night is comfortable more than morning , sleeping one hour tonight equivalent 3 hours per morning , reading is so exciting with a fresh air ,enjoy with a sunrise ,work becomes easy , both of you and nature become one unit , start with a sunrise and finish with a sunset , i'm in love with the morning , i try to become a morning person .))

I would like to make English Friends! Hello everyone, I am Heba from Egypt and I would like to meet people not only to be a language partner but also to make friends I am trying to learn English language and learn other languages because I love learning languages too much &I want to become a translator