Please correct my sentences, Thanks. 1 - I was going to eat my dinner, but they called me from the hospital and asked me to come immediately, there was an emergency case. 2 - The cop would catch the thief, but a fast car hit him. 3 - They were to leave, but the rain was so heavy outside. 4 - Nora and Sam were going to get married last year, but the stupid man cheated her with her friend. 5 - Were you going to rent this apartment last week ? If yes, then you lost your chance. The apartment has been rented this morning. 6 - I will been have sleeping for 2 hours, when you are at home. 7 - I think your health will be more better before the school starts, because you will have been taking this new medicine for whole month. 8 - Peter is going to have been working for 4 months in his new job, by the time his birthday comes. 9 - My father will have been leaving from 2 hours, before his plane takes off. Don't worry, he will not miss the plane.10 - I asked Sally to stay with her grandmother at home, because we will have been having dinner outside when she wakes up. Please correct my sentences, or try to help me to express any of these sentences in a better way ( Like how native speakers would express ). May I ask you for one more thing? Could you please evaluate my sentences ( From 1 - 10 ) from your opinion ? Thanks in advance.

Please correct my sentences, Thanks. 1 - I was going to buy a white Toyota. but after seeing the red one, I changed my mind. 2 - John would play a role in the school show. but I refused to let him doing that, because he would need to attend the training on the role everyday in the school, and he needs to focus on his lessons these days, because the final exams are so close. 3 - I was to get the promotion of this deal, except for we disagreed on the price in the last moment. 4 - We were going to watch " up " movie in the cinema. but we decided to spend the night together at home. and we ordered KFC. 5 - The cat would scratch my leg, but fortunately I could run away quickly.Please correct my sentences, or try to help me to express any of these sentences in a better way ( Like how native speakers would express ). May I ask you for one more thing? Could you please evaluate my sentences ( From 1 - 10 ) from your opinion ? Thanks in advance.

Please correct my entry, Thanks. ( 5 ) 1 - In the first place, I would like to introduce myself before talking about the details of the project. 2 - Not only listening to songs could help you to improve your listening skills, but also watching movies could return with great effect. 3 - As a matter of fact, your skills are not suitable to this position. but we will keep your resume in our database, to consider you if there are other chances in the future. 4 - Today our teacher gave us a suddenly exam. fortunately I was preparing myself for something like that. In like manner, I am expecting he will repeat that next week. 5 - In addition of your rude behavior, you still don't want to admit your fault. This is not acceptable from you. Please correct my entry, or try to help me to express any of these sentences in a better way ( Like how native speakers would express ). May I ask you for one more thing? Could you please evaluate my sentences ( From 1 - 10 ) from your opinion ? Thanks in advance.

Please correct my entry, Thanks. ( 4 ) 1 - In the first place, I need to drink some water, and then we can start our meeting. So, May I ? 2 - Not only you who are responsible for caring about the house work, but also me have to share you playing this role. We are partners, and we share one life. 3 - As a matter of fact, I wasn't thinking about marriage at all. but after meeting her, I feel that I would feel regret about each moment I spend in the rest of my life without her. 4 - I have noticed that many students here prefer to start with Word as a first exam except John. In like manner, I have decided to follow John steps and starting with Windows. 5 - Today I have plans to go for shopping with some friends, In addition going to visit Mr Tom our previous maths teacher. He has moved to other school. We need to congrats him and to wish the good luck. Please correct my entry, or try to help me to express any of these sentences in a better way ( Like how native speakers would express ). May I ask you for one more thing? Could you please evaluate my sentences ( From 1 - 10 ) from your opinion ? Thanks in advance.

Please correct my entry, Thanks. 1 - The presence of the chairman of the board coupled with his two sons means that a very important decision will be made. I am expecting that one of them will inherit the responsibility. 2 - Your brother has made a lot of wrong decisions, which caused the failure of his marriage. In the same way, I can see you following his steps. Pay attention to your actions before the regret will be too late. 3 - I don't care so much about my clothes style. I think simple and colorful clothes are enough for me. In the other side, My brother cares so much about following latest fashion trends. and in the same fashion my cousin. They always spend a lot of time shopping together.4 - Three things you should follow to be a good teacher. First, be respectable. Respect your students, and don't accept anything from them except the respect. Second, be funny. Who likes the boring teacher?! try to make a funny atmosphere to keep your students attention always. Third, be concerned. Never ignore any one of your students when he tries to talk to you even if about personal matters. Always listen. 5 - In the light of the latest events in our school, there must be a deterrent punishment to anyone contravenes the schools rules and the instructions. Please correct my entry, or try to help me to express any of these sentences in a better way ( Like how native speakers would express ). May I ask you for one more thing? Could you please evaluate my sentences ( From 1 - 10 ) from your opinion ? Thanks in advance.