is this a good motivation letter any advice , correction ? thanks Dear Sir My name is X, born on March 17th.1994 in Amman-Jordan, I finished secondary school, and four years later I gained a bachelor degree in accounting. I worked as an accountant in an accounting company for 6 months, this experience was very stressful for me and the lack of opportunities for progression as an accountant increasingly became a larger issue. during my working time , I have shown a growing interest in business administration , my uncle owns an import and export company in Amman and he studied the same subject in Germany and I appreciated the good value and services his company provided my country and I got inspired to develop a business by my own . As the world becomes more and more technologically advanced, international trade becomes more and more rewarding, both in terms of profit and personal satisfaction. In order to achieve this goal, I’m planning to work in my uncle’s company for a year prior to start a company after I gain a business administration degree. Additionally, working in this field will allow me to travel around the world, Meeting different people and work with customers and suppliers and this will bring me so much value. I have passed b1 Goethe exam and now I’m studying b2 level and I’m very excited to complete my German language studies in Germany and I’m sure I’ll absorb the language faster because everyone around me speaking and interacting with German language . I’ve got accepted at TU Clausthal University in a business administration program which is bachelor degree lasts for 6 semesters and enrolled in a language course in the same University , I’ll start my studies in 2019 after I pass the German language test DSH. And I’m happy that I got accepted in TU Clausthal University the teaching methods are of a very high standard and the nature in the city is outstanding. And I’m sure starting with another bachelor is better than with a master degree, there’s knowledge I haven’t gain by studying accountant that lack of knowledge is going to be problematic with studying masters. At the end I’d like to thank you for considering my Application.