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I will be greatful if anyone kindly corrected my essay about Preparing food today
Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?
Preparing food today have improved, and became much easier as a result of science development. In fact, this improvement played a great role in enhancing the way of living in many aspects. But in the other hand it has a negative effects that we should care about.
In the past, the time that needed to cook a mail was long, while today food companies have created ready meals which only needs to be heated. Furthermore, many cooking machines are available today which not only save time, but also it save effort such as Microwave and rice cooking machine. This improvement is great as time is more valuable today.
Food contamination is an issue that was common before. Frequent handling of food and exposing it to low degree of temperature are the main sources of contamination. Today technologies have minimized the handling, and controlled the cooking temperature according to scientific knowledge and recommendations. Therefore, food today is more healthier with regard to contamination.
Finally, many people today suffer from certain diseases such as cancer and diabetes. Unfortunately, scientific researchers declared that our food contains chemical added substances which act as preservative. Some papers proofed that this chemical substances is one of the contributing factors that lead to such diseases. While others stated that this substances are generally unhealthy.
Overall, new technologies have improved our life style significantly. I think that we should take advantage of a new invention. But in the other hand we should be more careful about buying a natural healthy food as we can.
June 26, 2016
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My Grandmother
My grandmother is a great women. I raised and grew up with her, and she is really nice with me. she has taught me many traditional value, and I am still learning from her. actually, she is a business women, she rent a number of building other than her restaurant and hotels. Anyway, the last weak she was sick, she suffered from respiratory infection. I was with her all the time, I gave her the medication, and I served her the best I can. she appreciated that by giving me about 5000$. I surprised and said that I don't want anything, but she refused to take it back. I really love this women, and I wish for her a good health.
I appreciate any correction.
July 1, 2014
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My writing issue
I have spent time in order to improve my English, and in all English evaluation exams which I have taken my writing score is the lowest one. When I write I hesitate do I should write the or not before noun. I red explanation about that, but I still don't understand. For example, the life is beautiful or life is beautiful.
I appreciate any correction
June 25, 2014
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Most Five Important Things in Life
I have many special friend, but Waleed is the exceptional one. He is funny, kind and has great personality which makes him loved by many peoples.
Anyway, today I met him at funeral home, and he asked me do you know what is the most Five important things in live?
I said No. He said the most five important things in live are three items: Water and air !!
I said you should be earnest in event like this, while I am laughing inside.
He said "look" If you want me to be as you want, that's mean you want me not to be as I want.!
I said ok, be who you are my most craziest person in life!
June 25, 2014
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They Said I am Strange!
Today, I went to a grocery store nearby. I bought some stuff. Then, I took my grocery bag and went to accouter to paid. He asked me how much do you have as a routine question to many seller here. I said I have 25 which equal my grocery price, and I intended to pay. then, he took my bag for counting. I refused, and took my bag back! and said no I won't allow you to count. he surprised, and said why? and other customers looking at me. I said, you asked me how much, and I told you, then you wanted to count, why you did not believe me, and you think I am lying. He said I don't said you are lying, and it's my wright to count for my customers. I said yes it's your wright, but it's not your wright to insult them and give me impression that they are lying. if you want to count your customers stuff, count them before you ask them how much do they have, or if you asked them don't count.
Anyway, some customers agreed with me and some agreed with him!!
June 23, 2014
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