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My dream job Qs: Your shchool magazine is running a series of articels under the title " My dream job". Write an article to appear in the series describing your ideal job. My answer: I am writing to inform you about my career options. When I was a child, I wanted to be a business woman whom is going to work in the lead company. As I grew up, my dream job still follow me. The first one is the fact that I choiced this job for myself because it is very suitable for me and I believe that I will have a chance to do it. I knew Bill Gates and Steve Jobs with their success when I was a little girl. The went on their dream way and they successed. It means they successed when they chose the suitable job. In addition, my major job in the university is international business which will exactly help me if I wanna be a business woman. Secondly, the business is an active job that is really suitable for my character. During the first year of the university, I have worked a part-time job in clothes shop. I must make up a list of sales and tell to customers what suits them. Although it makes me feel tired, I love it. Finally, being a business worker is a short way to earn lots of money, I think. Say earning so much money because of entreprenuer's rich I saw. Furthermore, some people traded and being rich when they was young. All that give me very encouragements to do my dream. In conclusion, though very difficult for me to be a super-rich, I will try hard. After I complete four years in university, I must make my dream of career.
April 14, 2014
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Writing task 1 in the Ielts test Writing task 1 in the Ielts test ( Cambridge 5 page 52) Link of the Question:http://www.flickr.com/photos/99087187@N07/13144906974/ My answer, please check for me. ." The bar chart reflects the most important reasons for study of students in five age groups selected and how much support they got from employers. . Overall, it is clear that the figure for reason for study of under 26 years old students was hightest, while there was no different in this figure of students aged 40-49 years old. Moreover, the proportion of reason for career was hightest in most age group. In addition, the percentage of support that under 26 years old students got was hightest from employer. . More specifically, reason figures for career of under 26 years old students around 80%, out numbered than these figures for interest in this age group. In terms of the quantity, more reasons for interest of over 49 years old students group than reasons for career of this age group ( over 70 percent compared to over 20 percent). Conversely, the percentage of reason for study was not changed of 40-49 year-old student, around 40 percent. . The figuer for support of under 26 year-old students from employers was around 60 percent, more than three times of this figure for 30-39 year-old students, the age group had lowest suppory percentages.
March 14, 2014
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Hello every body, I want to study English but my english is not well at the moment, please help me!!!

This is my answer for the Writing task 1 in the IELTS test, please check and correct for me, thanks a lots :DDDD

Link of question ( Cambridge for Ielts 5, page 29): http://www.flickr.com/photos/99087187@N07/13130270913/lightbox/

My answer:

         " The line chart reflects the figure for people aged 65 yeas old in three selected countries from 1940 to 2040.

           Overall, it is clear that the percentage of 65 year-old people increased sharply, thought at varying degrees.

           More specifically, in 1940, the figure for population aged 65 was hightest in America. By contrast, in this year, the propotion of people aged 65 years old was lowest in Japan, after ten centuries, this figure was hightest, over 25%.

          In 1940-1980 period, the percentage of 65 year olds in the USA saw a slight growth by 15%. Then, this figure fluctuated in fourty years. In addition, the 2020-2040 period experienced a more noticeable increase in population aged 65 figures in America from 14% to 23%. At this point on wards, the figure for 65 year-old people rised strongly to 26% in Sweden, althought this period experienced some fluctuations. The figure for people of this group saw a gradually increase in Japan from 1940 to 2020. After 20 years, this figure went up to 27%."

 Your correction will make me better, thanks every body :)

 

March 13, 2014
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