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Daniel Inouye Pearl Harbor bio (part 1), 中文翻译. ( 在锻炼汉语语法! 我的汉语很差,需要帮助 :D ) [我的写作能力太差,所以我我想可能翻译别人的作品会更有意思。:D 我想试试保存这原单副本的盛传和用地道中文语法和词汇。请不要以为你需要修改整个这文章!And if you don't know who Daniel Inouye is: http://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E4%B8%B9%E5%B0%BC%E7%88%BE%C2%B7%E4%BA%95%E4%B8%8A ] Part 1, English: “PAPA!” I CALLED, THEN FROZE into immobility, my fingers clutching that [radio] button. I could feel blood hammering against my temple, and behind it an unspoken protest, like a prayer – It’s not true! It is a test, or a mistake! It can’t be true! — but somewhere in the core of my being I knew that all my world was crumbling as I stood motionless in that little bedroom and listened to the disembodied voice of doom. Now my father was standing in the doorway listening, caught by that special horror instantly sensed by Americans of Japanese descent as the nightmare began to unfold… “Come outside!” my father said to me, and I plunged through the door after him… 第一部分,中文: "爸!” 我喊,然后被恐惧吓的动不了, 手指还在紧抓那个[单选]按钮。我能感觉到血在我鬓角后拼命流,和疼痛后一个说不出的抗议, 像个祈求 – 这肯定不正确!这是个测试,或者一个差错! –但是我心里已经明白我整个世界在崩溃直到我在那小卧室里一动不动的占和聆听那个无形, 充满厄运的语音。 现在我父亲站在门口里听,被那特别的恐怖抓走 (“而去”?),那恶梦一开始日裔美国人就感觉到的恐怖······ “快出来!” 我爸跟我说,和我猛穿通大门跟他走······ Version with explanation: "爸!” 我喊,然后被恐惧吓的动不了(“吓成雕像”?跟像恐“恐惧”,不太像 “害怕”), 手指还在紧抓那个[单选]按钮。我能感觉到血在我鬓角后拼命流,和疼痛后一个说不出的抗议, 像个祈求 – 这肯定不正确!这是个测试,或者一个差错! –但是我心里已经明白我整个世界在崩溃直到我在那小卧室里一动不动的占和聆听那个无形[我想表示“没有身体的”。中文有这个词么?], 充满厄运的语音。 现在我父亲站在门口里听,被那特别的恐怖抓走 (“而去”?),那恶梦一开始日裔美国人就感觉到的恐怖······ “快出来!” 我爸跟我说,和我猛穿通大门[想表达应力的感觉,他在进入冒险的感觉]跟他走······ [感谢你的帮助! 我非常需要!]
March 27, 2014
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