Can any one help me in improving this article? There are two paragraphs which sound crispy and need enhancement. would any one help me in making them more attractive. ------ 1.JU participated in the sector of Business; where JU presented its three Business Program concentrations (E-management, Retail Management, and Event Management), the sector of Banking and Finance to talk about its fourth Business concentration which it is the Islamic Banking and Finance, and the medical sector with its Environmental Health and Healthcare Management Programs. 2. At the end of the exhibition, Jumeira University signified its appreciation for the excellent accomplishment achieved by all the attendees by handing them symbolic souvenirs, and wished that the event could help the students in choosing their career paths. -------- Please help, I'll be flooded with grateful.

The phrase "so much as"! Can any one give us little more explanation about the phrase (so much as)! I'm tiny bit confused with it, and net yet able to use it in a conversation.

There's no time! In this hectic pace of modern life we are living currently, we barely find enough time to do things we like. Instead, we're completely busy with responsibilities and running errands that suck the life out of us. and ironically the time still not enough to accomplish things we've been planning to make them done. When my eyes flatter open in the morning, a jumbled thoughts pile into my mind about the things and challenges I'm gonna face within the day. And no matter how efforts I put in repeating those bullshit affirmations that are supposed to boost-up my self esteem which by it should make me able to go on with the process of achieving my goals. Notwithstanding, at the end of day all what I can feel is that I'm damp around the eyes because of the sadness emotions stirred by the fact "I've done nothing !!" Work takes up most part of my days, then there's the long commuting to job. And I guess you all know how Dubai is famous of its road that we always stuck on its traffic jam. So in order to spare for reaching office late, we have to leave our home earlier than what we're supposed to, and sacrifice that important precious portion of sleeping. Even in weekends, I'm lost in my personal stuff, between washing my car and visiting the barber shop. I'm still in a standstill of how to manage everything has been delayed over the week to be done in the weekend. I miss laying in the bed enjoying the stillness. Or spending more time in reading books and magazines. I don't even find a tiny few minutes to read a newspaper and be aware of what's going around in the world. I feel nothing but a slightly functional zombie. AND I'D LIKE TO DELVE MORE IN THE ISSUE IN THIS NOTE, BUT THERE'S NO TIME. !!!! At last, thanks for italki.com, I got an e-mail this morning about the importance of writing a note book entry. If that message hasn't been sent, I would have not got motivated to vent out what aches me in this article. Sincerely Mousa,