could anyone make my essay more American Way? Thanks a lot. Very appreciate your help. And if you need help, please feel free remind me anytime. The most basic reason that I am willing to transfer is that I want to pursue better opportunities for my major- Biomedical Engineering. To know more detailed academic information and research contents of universities , I would like to browse websites. After entering the homepage and clicking into Research link, a brand-new world of technology grasped my eyes. One of the most impressive researches to me is "Identity swap", producing brain cells by converting skin cells. I am so interested in such kind of research. Therefore, for further study, I am more inclined to bioinformatics and cellular technology, especially genetics engineering. It is very clear for me to choose my future pursuit and career. The second but more subjective reason is that I want to challenge myself. As an inspirational proverb says," If a person does not force himself to one, he will not know how good he will be" (Chao Gao, 2012, Good is pushed out, China, East Press) Therefore, I want to try my best to apply for my dream schools, as if ascend mountain to summit. If I give up and just satisfy present conditions- a stable job, top student in my class, going to party on Friday, I will definitely be regretful in my future. I am ambitious rather than take things as they are. What I like to do is to challenge my life ceaselessly. My goals in the coming two years are that first I want to work for research groups with professors as a volunteer. I will search for interests areas and e-mail professors for opportunities, such as cellular function and gene expression on tissue engineering or techniques on the cell migration and cancer metastasis. From experiments, I can learn many, not only the skills to use equipments in the right way, but also a cooperative team work and leadership with partners. At the same time, I will try my best to apply for tutor as my part-time job, which I can help others by what I have learnt while earning pocket money because I want to be more financially independent. Then I want to join in honor program. I am a honor student in my present university, and I believe I am still outstanding after transferring. With my struggling, I hope to join Tau Beta Pi honor society and win departmental awards. There are great opportunities for outstanding students, in terms of several major related internship and several awards for biomedical engineering.