Please help me correct my essay, Thanks :D Topic : Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. Essay : I prefer to live in a big city. Only in a big city, I have the best conditions for work, for study and for life. Most of all big company have a main office in one of the big cities. If I want a good job in a big company, I must live in one of the big cities. In Vietnam, almost famous University lives in Hanoi, Danang, Saigon, they are three biggest cities of Vietnam. I can only live in one of three this cities if I want a good education. When I live in the big city, have a good job in some of company, I will buy a good house, a car or just motorbike. I take all of my family to my house, they and I will be taken care from one of the biggest Hospital. Only biggest hospitals in a big city have modern equipment, good doctors. I can comportably about the health of my family. A man must have responsibility for himself, for his family and he must take the good things for his family. If I live in small town, I can’t get a good job for a lot of money, I can’t study in a good university, I can’t get a good care from good hospital. I will feel helpless, I can’t another choice. When I get a lot of money, I can buy a house in small town and rest in there sometimes. That is the life I want to choose, that’s life I enjoy. Live in a big city and get holiday in small town.