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Hello,
If I volunteer or work100 or 90 hours in work, How can I say it?
for example, If I attend courses or organize events and activities.
I don't know if you understand or not.
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What does "offer to" mean?
what does offer to mean? does it mean to become a volunteer to do something?
e.g
offer to take them out or go for coffee.
offer to go with them to...
Thanks in advance!
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Describe your favourite animal. ( correct please)
Describe your favourite
• What kind of animal it is
• Describe it briefly
• Why you like the animal
and describe why it is your favourite animal.
I am going to talk about my favourite animal. Actually, I like many animals, so I think it is difficult to choose one. However, the animal that i love most is the rabbit.
It is a small cute animal with long floppy ears and rounded in shape.
They have a short floppy and strong large legs. Rabbit loves to hop and burrows in the ground.
What makes me love this animal is because of their shape and fur. I like to hold and touch their soft fur. I remember the day when I saw a small white rabbit for the first time, I hold it in my hand to my mother and asked her to have a rabbit like that one.
She refused and I cried all day.
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Is it corrsct to say ’I have been experiencing in teaching ..” or I have taught”?
I have been experiencing in teaching (subject) to my niece at home.
I have taught ( subject) to my niece at home.
Note: I still sometimes teach them.
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Please correct my answer to this question.
Describe a time when you had to do something in a hurry.
You should say
- what you were doing
- when this was
- why you had to hurry
- and explain how you felt at that time
My answer:
I would like to talk about a time when I had to hurry to get ready to a trip with my family when I was a student.
It was a Thursday night about four years ago. We should hurry to catch an airplane on time, so my older brothet went by himself while my mother and I were going with my younger brother. We picked our luggage quickly and went to the airport.
The problem that we fight had two hours left to take off. So we decided to divide missions between us. My mother and I had to take a vaccine in hosptial’s airport while my brothers should check our luggage and take a boarding pass.
I remmber that moment when my older brother called me on phone and told me that he finished. I was filled with a sense of happiness because we finished in an hour and we had an hour left. We finally go into a plane.
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Do you think that my answer is enough to this question.
Q: Talk about a person who have done something for environment.
I would like to talk about a person who I think she made something for the the environment. Her name is Arama. She is from Saudi Arabia but She lived in America with her family.
She decided to quite something in order to not harm nature. So, She began using useful resources that are more friendly to the environment, For example, she began using glass straws instead of plastic straw.
Also, when Arama goes to stores, she holds Bag with her as a replacement for the plastic bag.
She is one of the social media influence, who has many followers, that means many people followed her and tried to do as what she does.
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please correct my new writing
Q: The chart below shows figures for attendances at hospital emergency care departments in Northern Ireland by age group in December 2016 and December 2017.
Attendances at emergency care departments per 1000-population
The bar chart illustrates how many age groups attended emergency care departments at a hospital in North Ireland between December 2016 and December 2017.
Overall, the majority of attendances at hospital emergency care departments were in December 2017 more than in December 2016. People aged under 5, 75 and over made the most visits in the two years.
According to the charts, the figures for patients who required emergency treatment in December 2016 were almost between 21% and 64% compared to December 2017 which rose by 12% per 1000 population. The proportion of elderly aged 75 and over contributed 63% in December 2016 but this figures increased slightly to around 66% in December of 2017. Young children attended ER departments by 51% in December 2016 and 52% one year later.
The other aged group was shown a noticeable decrease compared to the elderly and young children. The least number of attendance was recorded for aged 5 to 15 in both months. Finally, there was almost no difference in the figures for A&E (accident and emergency) visits among people aged 16 to 40, 45 to 64 and 65 to 74.
October 18, 2018
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please correct my answering for this question
Q: Talk about a decision you made with someone help.
I would like to talk about a decision that I made one year ago. it was learning a foreign language, Japanese language. I'm keen on Japanese culture and I love Japan in general, so I decided to learn this language in order to see and know how the Japanese people think. I began asking a Japanese learner on the internet on twitter about how can I start learning. she advised me to begin with the alphabets then you should buy a specific book (Genki) with some stories book. I took her advice and I bought some books from Amazon. At the same time I started learning alphabets, then I learned some grammar and vocabularies from Genki book. In fact, I'm sometimes bored and I told myself why I chose to learn this language. However, I'm happy that I made this decision because I took steps to achieve my dream and now can understand some sentences.
thanks in advance.
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Please correct my essay.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of using car by both genders for seven purposes ( courses, Bank, visiting town, visting friends, Running Errands, shopping, work and recreation) in 2005.
Overall, women had the higher percentages of car trips than men. Both genders males and females used car mostly for work. Whereas men was the leaset users of car for bank and running errands compared to visiting town which was the leaset usage by women.
Acorrding to what shown in the chart, Work, recreation and visiting town was used the most by men than women. Males were used car for jobs almost 52% whereas females were around slightly 39%. Men also were visiting town using car more than women with around 10% compared to women who had almost 3% of using their car for going to town.
On other hands, Courses, bank, running errands, visiting friends and shopping were the most purposes for women to use car with about 25% than men. Women drove car for bank and running errands for about 7% than man who driving car for the same purpose with around 3%.
October 16, 2018
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What does “took part in “here mean?
took part
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