Please, check my essay and evaluate it on the scale of 1-5 points. Also don't hesitate to write comments.
Some
people pursue career paths that lead to management positions. Other people
follow career paths leading to positions of individual responsibility, which do
not involve managing others.
Which career path are you more likely to follow? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.<o:p></o:p>
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Work plays an important role in lives of people. It is necessary to choose your career carefully, because this decision will affect the whole life. Whatever sphere of activity you choose, in the end you will have to decide whether you want to work on a position of individual responsibility or a management position. Both options are good, because the only important thing in life is happiness. <o:p></o:p>
I think answer on the above-mentioned question depends on person’s character. Some people fear to take responsibility and lead others. They want to response only for their own actions, not actions of others. The second category of people is more likely to hold managerial positions. They are open to responsibilities that include management and coordination of other employers. <o:p></o:p>
As for me, I support the second option and in my career path probably will choose to occupy a management position. This position could give me an opportunity to develop and realize on practice my organizational, leadership and communication skills. I am aware that such positions take huge responsibility and I could be affected by decisions of the people I am responsible for. Nevertheless, this kind of job is really interesting and gives an opportunity to solve immediate problems, work as a crisis manager. <o:p></o:p>
CEOs, businessmen, politicians, governmental officials, chiefs of departments are good examples of management positions. They are well-known, receive good salaries and have great experience of leading firms, institutions and even states. Work on a management positions is a risky one, but it gives lots of benefits for personal and professional development. <o:p></o:p>
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