Please correct me this writing for the topic🙏 Topic: Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy? Some people believe that having a lot of money is the main way to stay happy in their life and this way of thinking may be correct in a certain situation. For instance, having a lot of money and spending it without thinking about keeping some money to pay monthly fixed bills such as utilities and rent have positive effects on people’s mind. They can purchase whatever they want and eat and drink as much as they wish. They can also go traveling around the globe and stay at luxury hotels with a beautiful view from a bedroom. These experiences ensure ultimate happiness and this kind of memories will stay in their mind for good. On the other hand, are they really happy? Another factor that brings happinesses to people’s life is the people around them. Family and your close friends are priceless and you cannot buy them even if you are a billionaire. Some people will be friends with you if you have a lot of money. However, this kind of relationships doesn’t last long and it is unlikely to be genuine. Having lifetime friends and family is grueling wonderful and they will support you without hesitation no matter what. Finding true friends is by far more difficult and more precious than being successful in business or having a lot of money. I’m conclusion, I would say having a lot of money is the main way to be happy in a limited situation and having genuine friends and family can make people happy as well.

Please help me correct my writing! topic: You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Dear Sir White, Thank you for having me art your cookery course the other day. I usually cook for my lunch and dinner so I really enjoyed making bread with you. Unlike my daily cooking for meals, making breads and loafs is very fun. I have baked several breads by myself since the course such as chocolate bread, banana bread and even sandwiches. I really appreciate the basic tips that you taught in your course for baking because now my family can taste fresh breads ay home and it is very healthy to eat homemade bread with no preservatives. Recently I have been to an authentic Italian restaurant that many of my friends like for the first time and ordered a traditional pizza. The pizza was delicious and its crust was perfectly crunchy. I wonder if you have another cooking course for pizza. I'd like to take it if you offer it. Sincerely Kazu

Please help me correct my writing🙏 Agree or Disagree Topic: Modern technology can improve our ability to communicate? I agree with the idea that modern technology can improve our ability to communicate, and I have two reasons for this. Firstly, it takes less time to communicate with people than before. In the past, the only way to keep in touch with family and friends who lived far away was writing a letter taking more than at least a day. However, telephones and the Internet allow us to keep in touch with loved ones and friends without spending time like correspondence by letters in tis modern society. Secondly, modern technologies have enhanced an accessibility in communication. Thanks to the Internet, we can call our family and friends and send text messages to them anywhere and any time as long as we have reception. Because the modern technologies have greatly contributed to the way people communicate with others, I believe that they can improve our ability to communicate.

Please help me correct this writing:) Topic: Do you think good sportsmanship is more important than winning? I believe that good sportsmanship is more important than winning, and I have two reasons for this opinion. First, a good attitude towards other players should be possessed by all the players in all fields of a sport. For example, any ricing sports player performs with other participants. He or she could prevent the others from overcoming him or her by blocking their way. However, this action is against sportsmanship and is considered as an unacceptable behavior. Second, a sense of achievements always follows good sportsmanship. All athletes feel a sense of achievements when they hit a world record. They would be haunted by their own intolerant behaviors for the rest of their lives if they accomplished the record by disrespecting sportsmanship such as using illegal drugs. For these reasons, I believe that good sportsmanship is more important than a victory.

Please help me correct this writing:) Agree or Disagree Topic: The number of young people who live with their parents after they finish education will increase in the future. I disagree with the idea that the number of young people who live with their parents after they finish education will increase in the future, and I have two reasons for this opinion. Firstly, young people seek for personal freedom after graduation from school to enjoy doing some activities in their free time. For example, plan to have home party with their friends and partner with some beverages. Living with parents might prevent them from doing so, because this will make some noises that will distract parents’ sleeping time. Secondly, the more developed technologies have become, the safer living by oneself is. Recent built houses are equipped with security cameras and even some building residents have two keys to enter their own room. For these reasons, I believe that more young people decide to live by themselves instead of living with their parents in the future.

Please help me correct! I would appreciate it if you leave your thought on this topic in your comment:) Topic: Will humans live on other planets someday? I believe that humans will live on other planets someday, and I have two reasons to support this opinion. Firstly, the earth has been being destroyed recently. We have witnessed a lot of unusual natural disasters such as fierce wild fire and big hurricanes caused by global warming. These are the bad signs that the earth is on the verge of collapsing. We need a different place to reside and survive in. Secondly, Spacious technologies have been developed dramatically nowadays. Traveling to the space was not for a regular citizen before. However, it has become more popular among rich people. In the future, more demands to go to the space will increase so the demands will inspire space industry to develop technologies eventually. For these reasons, I believe that humans will live on other planets someday in the future.

Please help me correct! I appreciate your additional thought on this topic too:) Topic : Should Japan do more to protect its historic sites? I believe that Japan should do more to protect its historic sites, and I have two reasons for this opinion. Firstly, protections to historic sites of Japan will result in attracting tourists not only from whole Japan, but overseas. With appropriate protections, the sites are able to keep their beauty and history and touristic industry prosper in many places of Japan. These conservations help Japanese touristic industry keep growing and many tourists spend their money in the local places of historic sites. Secondly, historic sites of Japan educate the next generation for what happened in its history. These sites are actually alive witnesses of the history in the contemporary society, and should be preserved for the priceless value in terms of education. Fore these reasons, I believe that Japan do more to protect its historic sites.

Please correct me🙏 Topic : Is happiness more important than success in business? I believe that happiness is more important than success in business, and I have two reasons for this opinion. Firstly, spending time with family and loved one is a life itself. When you die, having much money does not mean anything. On the other hand, having many family and friends taken care of you is the goal of everyone’s happy life. Personal relationships outweigh successful life in business without doubt. Secondly, success in business, which always means working too much, comes with stress anytime. When you try to success with your job, you need to overworking the most time. This usually results in having mental success and you cannot lead a happy life in the end with that. It is for these reasons that I believe that happiness is more important than success in business.