Could you please help me correct it and make it precisely and natively?
1 In the three departments, A achieved the highest sales figure, followed by B and C.
2 During the second part of the five years, the decrease is more noticable.
3 It decreased to 20% in 2004 from 40% in 2000, and then in 2005, the pattern reversed entirely, surging up to 68%.

Question

Could you please help me correct it and make it precisely and natively?
1 In the three departments, A achieved the highest sales figure, followed by B and C.
2 During the second part of the five years, the decrease is more noticable.
3 It decreased to 20% in 2004 from 40% in 2000, and then in 2005, the pattern reversed entirely, surging up to 68%.

Answer

the First two sentences are correct but the third one can be written as:
"the rate decreased from 40% to 20% in 2000 but the statistics improved in 2005 and the rate increased up to 68%

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