Could you please tell me is there a difference between the two sentenses?
1.Those who have the highest scores are the greatest maximizers who compare products more than those who have the lowest scores both before and after making a purchasing decision, it takes longer time for them to decide what to buy.
2.People who score highest on the test---the greatest maximizers---engage in more product comparisons than the lowest scorers, both before and after they make purchasing decision, and they take longer to decide what to buy.

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Could you please tell me is there a difference between the two sentenses?
1.Those who have the highest scores are the greatest maximizers who compare products more than those who have the lowest scores both before and after making a purchasing decision, it takes longer time for them to decide what to buy.
2.People who score highest on the test---the greatest maximizers---engage in more product comparisons than the lowest scorers, both before and after they make purchasing decision, and they take longer to decide what to buy.

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There really isn't much difference between them they are just worded a little differently. But the second sentence specifically refers to those who score high on tests, while the first sentence talks about anyone who scores high in life.

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The first one is incorrect. 
I think you read the second one, and tried to rewrite it (the first one). 
The first one is not only lacking in punctuation, but there are mistakes as well.

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It is basically the same with different wording.

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