Please find some gramma problem in my text ~ Thank you~
Everything goes wrong to me,

I don't know what happened...

So many ideas in my mind...

I wanna to give up on tour guide,maybe It's doesn't belong to me

But when I come to the company,I had decided to go aborad from there.

And now ...?

Maybe it's not the right time yet. ....

Time proves everything.

I missed so many things...

But I have to make a choice for myself!

Some of my college mates had left the city for their dream after graduated...

Actually I wanna to go to unfamiliar city

And strive for my career ,my love ,my future...

Dream always brighter

But now I do lost myself.....

Question

Please find some gramma problem in  my text ~ Thank you~
 Everything goes wrong to me, 

        I don't  know what happened... 

         So many ideas in my mind... 

       I wanna to give up on tour guide,maybe It's doesn't belong to me 

             But when I come to the company,I had decided to go  aborad from there.

        And now ...?  

           Maybe it's not the right time yet. ....

            Time proves everything. 

         I missed so many things... 

             But I have to make a choice for myself!

            Some of my college mates had left the city for their dream after graduated...

                Actually I wanna to go to unfamiliar city

                   And strive for my career ,my love ,my future...

                Dream always brighter

                     But now I do lost myself.....

Answer

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Everything goes wrong for me, 
I have so many ideas in my mind... 
I wanna give up on being a tour guide. Maybe it's not for me.
But when I came to the company, I had decided to go abroad from there.
Some of my college mates left the city for their dream after they graduated...
Actually, I wanna to go to an unfamiliar city.
And strive for my career, my love, my future...  (or my career, my passion, my future)
Dream always brighter.
But now I've lost myself.....

The above sentences were corrected to sound more natural. Grammatically, it had some errors, but overall, it was very good.

Keep your head up. Life is about the journey, not the final destination.

Answer

"It's doesn't belong to me " should be " it doesn't belong to me"
actually, it's not too much problem in ur article..
anyway..just cheer up..

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