Could anyone please correct my sentences? =D
Hello. Can anyone please correct this following sentences?
I translated some parts of a story and want to know if i made any mistakes..
thank you in advance!
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The factory manager blamed his irresponsibility.
But the judge pronounced the man.
The judge reduced the business hours to 12 hours from 24 hours, according to the labour law
and allowed him to take a break during lunch time.
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11:20 people are working.
6:00 people are going home after their work.
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Their time has been stop running.
Everything in the world has stopped.
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The factory manager was blamed for his irresponsibility.
But the judge punished the man.
The judge reduced the working hours from 24 hours to12 hours , according to the labor law
and allowed him to take a break during lunch time.
Starting at 11:20 people are now working.
and finished at 6:00 .
Their time has been lessened.
Everything in the world stopped
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