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HELP! I need a person to check my text.It is my lecture for tomorrow! Please. Good afternoon,everyone.My name is X. I come from XX department. Today,my topic is changing myself is my top concern. I have a strong belief that an university is not some kind of school for jobs.However,university is an age and a place for us to find ourselves and being ourselves.Last year,I came to XXX.No relatives here,no friends here.Though it is not far away from my hometown,I still experienced a lot.I got to know how to take a train and how to be comfortable when I was alone.What is more important,I began to think about who I am. I am a type person who is always hesitate.It is not good to be hesitate to do anything.What is worse,I get used to that.When I was 7 years old,I became interested in guitar.I wanted to learn how to play it.I didn't tell my mom.I kept the secret for 9 years.Finally,I lost my interest in guitar. Recently,I took a French course. I just found that knowing a third language was cool.There is no use to care more about what I will loss.Also,it is not necessary to do everything until all is ready.Care more about the happiness I will get.Care more about what kind of person I will be.That is what a young people should do. YOU CAN correct,delate and change. Thanks.

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Good afternoon,everyone. My name is X. I come from XX department. Today, my topic is changing myself is my top PRIORITY. I have a strong belief that an university is not some kind of school for jobs(may be something like JOB FACTORY is more suited, i don't understand the phrase"school for jobs").However,university is an age(an age?) and a place for us to find ourselves and BE ourselves.Last year,I came to XXX.No relatives,no friends here. Though it is not far away from my hometown, I still FEEL LONELY. I NEEDED TO LEARN HOW TO TAKE a train and how to be comfortable when alone.What is more important,I began to think about who I am. I am a type OF person WHO ALWAYS HESITATES.It is not good TO HAVE DOUBTS WHEN DOING SOMETHING.What worse is that I GOT used to that.When I was 7 years old,I became interested in guitar.THEN I wanted to learn how to play it.I didn't tell my mom (ABOUT IT).I kept the secret for 9 years.Finally,I had lost my interest in guitar. Recently,I took a French course. I just found OUT that knowing a third language was cool.There was no use of CARING more about what I will LOSE.Also,it is not necessary to do everything until IT is ready.I Care more about the happiness I (no will) get. ALSO, Care more about what kind of person I will be.That is what (no a, people is plural) young people should do. My English is not perfect, i am kind of learning it too, that is why i have put my correction here. CAPS-corrections and changes inside brackets- something that can be avoided and simply stuff that i didn't understand
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hi, writing it as notebook entry would have been more suitable.

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