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I think one good costumer service I provided was for example once when I was working as a cabin and we had a long delay and we took off like 2 hours after the scheduled departure time and there was a passenger called David who after our flight was supposed to make a connection to another one and was very important for him to catch it, but it was almost imposible as there was almost no time, but I did my best I talked to a passenger seated in the first row if he wouldn't mind to be relocated to another seat, and at the end, David seated in the first row,so that he will be the first pax to disembark and then I talked to the dispacher and he co-operate with me and explained where the passenger had to go to do a quick check-in and where was the gate and the passenger at the end maneged to catch the flight. And then, almost two months later, I took him onboard again, and he was really grateful to me, and I feel very happy for it.Could anyone correct the mistakes I made in the text? thank you very much!!
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One example of a good costumer service I provided was when I was working as a cabin and we had a long delay. We took off about 2 hours after the scheduled departure time. There was a passenger called David who was supposed to make a connection to another flight, and it was very important for him to catch it. But it was quite impossible for him as there was almost no time, but I did my best. I asked a passenger seated in the first row if he wouldn't mind to be relocated to another seat. In the end, David sat in the first row, so that he would be the first passenger to disembark. Then I talked to the dispatcher. He cooperated with me and explained where the passenger had to go to do a quick check-in and where the gate was. The passenger, in the end, managed to catch the flight. And then, almost two months later, I took him on-board again. He was really grateful to me, and I feel very happy for it.
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For starters, you may want to make this several sentences instead of one huge run-on sentence.
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You must add punctuation first.
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notebook entry? :P
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One good costumer service I provided was for example when I was working as a cabin and we had a long delay. We took off like 2 hours after the scheduled departure time. And, there was a passenger called David who was supposed to make a connection to another flight and was very important for him to catch it. But it was quite imposible for him as there was almost no time, but I did my best I talked to a passenger seated in the first row if he wouldn't mind to be relocated to another seat. At the end, David seated in the first row, so that he would be the first pax to disembark. Then, I talked to the dispacher and he co-operate with me, and explained where the passenger had to go to do a quick check-in and where was the gate. The passenger, at the end, maneged to catch the flight. And then, almost two months later, I took him onboard again, he was really grateful to me, and I feel very happy for it.
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