Where is it?

I wrote my first composition yesterday, but no one has helped me revise it yet. Would you help me? could = 能不能 would = 愿不愿意 If you would like help with your composition, perhaps post it as a notebook entry or post it as a new question in this section?

I personally suggest that the question should be re-phrased as follows: "I wrote my first composition yesterday, but so far (or: till now) nobody helped me amend it. Could someone (please) help me?" Some points to note: 1) Past perfect tense (had + participle) is generally not adopted, unless you express two actions in the past, in which one of them occurred earlier than the other; then in such case, the first action should be described in past perfect. 2) After the verb "help", it is followed by an infinitive without "to" (one of the exceptions in English). 3) It is better to generalize the subject of your posed question (by using "someone" instead of "you") in order to apply to the audience in general. Well, hopefully you may some appropriate language partners who are able to offer you necessary assistance. --- Good weekend. / 祝　週末愉快。

Hi, thank you very much for having chosen my answer as the best one.　This gives me a positive recognition when I answer the questions of other members.　I hope that together we continue the learning of foreign languages.　Good day.　/　嗨，非常感謝妳選擇了我的答案為最佳答案。這在我為其他會員回答問題上給予了正面的肯定。但願我們在學習外語上一起繼續努力。祝　是日安好。

Just look at her notebook entry! I think that what mitong_hk-tw suggested is good and correct and I gave him "1" ;)