I need your help, please!
Could you tell me if this text is correct, please? Maybe the context is wrong and I can change it. I'm practicing a writing to my final exam.
Thanks a lot for your answers!

I saw your advertisement in the newspaper you are looking for a teacher to work in your school and I’m interested to apply for the job.
I have studied Information Technology and Repair of computers and I have knowledge of Secretary. I have worked as a Supervisor en Lincoln school for four years then I was a Secretary in Pedagogical National Monterrico Institute for five years, my last job was in a touristic hotel as a Receptionist, I speak two languages English and French.
At the moment, I’ve just finished a pedagogical course so this job would be a good opportunity to begin my practice as a English teacher.
I will be available to start work anytime that you think convenient. I enclose my CV as requested.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.

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I need your help, please!
Could you tell me if this text is correct, please? Maybe the context is wrong and I can change it. I'm practicing a writing to my final exam.
Thanks a lot for your answers!


I saw your advertisement in the newspaper you are looking for a teacher to work in your school and I’m interested to apply for the job.
I have studied Information Technology and Repair of computers and I have knowledge of Secretary. I have worked as a Supervisor en Lincoln school for four years then I was a Secretary in Pedagogical National Monterrico Institute for five years, my last job was in a touristic hotel as a Receptionist, I speak two languages English and French.
At the moment, I’ve just finished a pedagogical course so this job would be a good opportunity to begin my practice as a English teacher.
I will be available to start work anytime that you think convenient. I enclose my CV as requested.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.

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What can i do for you Sir ?

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I saw your advertisement in the newspaper that you are looking for a teacher to work in your school and I’m interested to apply for the job.
I  studied Information Technology and Computer Repair, but I also have secretarial knowledge.I have worked as a Supervisor in Lincoln School for four years, became a Secretary in Pedagogical National Monterrico Institute for five years. My latest job was in a Tourist Hotel as a Receptionist. I speak two languages which are English and French.

I’ve just finished a pedagogical course and this job would be a good opportunity to begin my practice as an English teacher.

I will be available to start work at your convenience.  I have  enclosed my CV as requested.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

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I saw your advertisement in the newspaper looking for a teacher to work in your school, and I’m interested to apply for the job.
I have studied Information Technology and computer repair and I also have secretarial knowledge. I worked as a Supervisor in Lincoln school for four years and afterward I was a Secretary in Pedagogical National Monterrico Institute for five years.  My last job was in a touristic hotel as a Receptionist. I speak two languages: English and French.
I have just finished a pedagogical course so this job would be a good opportunity to begin my practice as an English teacher.
I will be available to start work at your convenience. I have enclosed my CV as requested.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.

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