for this phase you need to add when i am and replace though. one way to say this is: "[when i am] Holding your hands, I won't get lost [even when/although] I close my eyes" add these two in order to make it a complete sentence. this sentence structure can work in poetry but in a writing such as an essay, you would want to say something along the lines of "even when i close my eyes i know i will not be lost because i am holding your hands." hope this helps

its perfect my friend ))) you are good.

if you trust him yes its .otherwise you need eyes yourself