I had a read, really very entertaining! Like a children's story, but for adults - in a clean way. I couldn't suggest any major corrections aside from spacing between paragraphs (not really an "English" correction). Downside is, they're also very long. Looks daunting, when we're all doing this for leisure. ;)

English speaking people may not correct your entries either because there are no corrections to make, your entries are to confusing or you just haven`t asked anyone to correct them. I will have a look for you...