Would you please improve the following sentence? Every comment is welcome.
" He tried to entice me with some shaming promises , attractions and advantages. "
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" He tried to entice me with some shameful promises , attractions and advantages. "
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He tried to entice me with some attractive promises.
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" He tried to convince/ attract/ persuade/ seduce/ me with some shaming (I bet you wanted to say CHARMING) promises , attractions and taking advantages of the situation. "
Sweet talk is an informal way to say the same.
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Hello rrooxx,
- 'shaming' doesn't make sense here.
- 'advantages' are things that put you in a better position,but you get those advantages and you don't get enticed by them. The word is not used correctly in this context.
- I don't know what kind of promises those are to choose the appropriate adjective for you .
So a more proper way to express it would be:
"He tried to entice me through some promises and attractions."
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