is it correct?????
it’s a discussion about what to do with larger passengers on board.
The obese people suffer and the people who are skinny and get spilled over on suffer as well.
A growing number of airlines are forcing bigger passenger to pay more as they cope with the costly and uncomfortable awkward encounters.
But some larger passengers who need more than one seat believe being charged extra is discriminatory.They claim that the airlines need to be making bigger seats.

Question

is it correct?????
it’s a discussion about what to do with larger passengers on board. 
The obese people suffer and the people who are skinny and get spilled over on suffer as well. 
A growing number of airlines are forcing bigger passenger to pay more as they cope with the costly and uncomfortable awkward encounters. 
But some larger passengers who need more than one seat believe being charged extra is discriminatory.They claim that the airlines need to be making bigger seats.

Answer

Dear Stefi!,

For the most part it is correct :) However, let me suggest some adjustments: I do not quite understand what you are trying to say with "get spilled over on" but I think you are trying to say "and the people who are skinny who are having their privacy invaded by the obese people suffer as well." Next, "A growing number of airlines are forcing bigger passenger..." should be "...bigger passengers...". Next, "but" seems a little awkward in the beginning of a sentence because it is a conjunction. "However, some larger passengers.." makes more sense.  I hope this information is helpful to you! :)

-Lihau

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