Could somebody please help me with a sentence?
The meaning i want to present is:
"This experience is very memorable, unforgettable and i will cherished it forever."

Could I make this sentece shorter by saying:
"It will be the very cherished memory to last long in my life."?

Thanks in advance,

Is there any grammar mistake in this sentence--"It will be the very cherished memory to last long in my life?"
can i use here...?Many thanks to Cherry,Peachey,Learner and Eevee for helping me out ! ^_^

Question

Could somebody please help me with a sentence?
The meaning i want to present is: 
"This experience is very memorable, unforgettable and i will cherished it forever."

Could I make this sentece shorter by saying:
"It will be the very cherished memory to last long in my life."?

Thanks in advance,


Is there any grammar mistake in this sentence-->"It will be the very cherished memory to last long in my life?"
can i use  here...?Many thanks to Cherry,Peachey,Learner and Eevee for helping me out ! ^_^

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Like cherry said in the first sentence:
"This experience is very memorable, unforgettable and i will cherished it forever." 
It is cherish, not cherished. To remember this you can think you will 'cherish' it forever so it won't be in the past tense until forever is over, haha.
I would suggest saying "It will be the most cherished and long lasting in my life."
It sounds more natural.

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If you cherish something, it means you keep it alive.
That's why you can use 'the most cherished memory' (as Peachey said) to mean that you want to keep a precious (or special) memory or experience alive.
(memorable = unforgettable)
Therefore, you can just say: ' It will be the most cherished memory' or 'It will be the most memorable experience'.

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True, there's many ways to write it (which is a good thing).

Suggestion: "It will be the most cherished and long-lived memory in my life"

(That's still shaky, but it groups the adjectives at least... you can cut out 'and long-lived', because if something is 'most cherished' we can assume it's memorable)

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Hello Tsu,

Yes ,there are so many ways to express this sentence.
There is one mistake in the first sentence though:
" and I will cherish it forever"
'cherish' not 'cherished' !

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