Hy can soemone correct this letter of motivation? Dear Sir or Madam, I hereby apply for one travel semester of International Industrial Entrepreneurship in the summer as a exchange student. I am currently studying Industrial and Business Systems at the University of Applied Sciences in Emden, Germany. Furthermore I've been made two schoolings my first training was as an agriculturist and after a few practices years I make my second training as a metalworker. Because of these two schoolings I had a lot of practical knowledge in economy and in technicality. This field of study is very close to my home field of study, and I guess it will help me for further decision making in my job. Groningen will be the best studies place for me if I look ahead because I wanted to work in the region of Bremen up to Groningen. I am comfortable in most computerised environments to aid and support daily work tasks and I appreciate teamwork as an efficient way of communication. I find analysing numbers or organising meetings interesting tasks and I am open to be exposed to new business experiences. I would appreciate becoming involved with and to support your interesting projects. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully