Is there any problem in this formal paragraph? I need to be precise and concise. Thank you
You are looking for a candidate with good communication skills. Being a student who studies abroad in the United Kingdom in 2020, I have been working with local students as well as international students with diverse backgrounds when completing the course work. I have gained excellent communication skills and enjoy social interaction. Being surrounded by people with diverse backgrounds inspires me a lot and helps me to think out of the box and helps me to learn how to cooperate with different people. Being keen to communicate with different people makes me interested in different languages as well. I demonstrated willingness to take risks through enrollment in French, German, Korean and Japanese courses. The experience of studying abroad demonstrated my ability of adjusting quickly to an unfamiliar environment and learned to establish rapport quickly with individuals in an unfamiliar environment. Being a researcher during four years of study in psychology, I trained my eye for detail. I believe that I am a detailed-oriented candidate who is able to work closely with and communicate effectively with senior management.
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You are looking for a candidate with good communication skills. As someone currently studying in the United Kingdom, I have been working with local students as well as international students with diverse backgrounds when completing the course work. I have gained excellent communication skills and enjoyed the social interaction. Being surrounded by people with diverse backgrounds inspires me, encourages me to think outside the box and to learn how to cooperate with different people. Being keen to communicate with different people makes me interested in different languages as well. I demonstrated willingness to take risks through enrollment in French, German, Korean and Japanese courses. The experience of studying abroad allowed me do demonstrate my ability to adjust quickly to an unfamiliar environment and to quickly establish a rapport with individuals in an unfamiliar environment. Having carried out research during my four years of study in psychology, I have trained my eye for detail. I believe that I am a detailed-oriented candidate who is able to work closely with and communicate effectively with senior management.
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*only problem is "bein a student who studies abroad in 2020.... should this be the past tense? Studied abroad??
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