Could u please correct this passage for my creative writing?
Travelling is one of my favourite hobby. Hardly people remains in the world who loves travelling. So I'm not quite different from them. In a week, I always try to visit in any good place or my preferable or favourite places. When I got exhusted or depressed, then I go for Gulshan’s one of my memorable area or Hatirjheel. After rambling to and fro of these places, my heart leaps up with joy and feeling much cool. However, I always prefer bus and train journey during any kind of long or short journey. I think no other journey is better then bus or train journey. Because, you can see different types of magnificent natural scenario from its window. You can also observe your journey place's culture, tradition and different types of lifestyle. It's really so amazing for everyone. When I go for journey, then I try to do something for remaining more memorable as like singing, saying quotes or playing games. I have already covered 54 districts of Bangladesh (It's really a great achievement for me.). I wish one day I can cover 64 districts of Bangladesh and I wish also to travel on the whole beautiful world.
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#Albert thanks for your correction.
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Traveling is one of my favourite hobbies. Hardly any people remain in the world who doen't like to travel. So I'm not quite diffirent from them. In a week, I alway try to visit any good places or my preferable and favourite places. When I get exhausted or depressed, I go th Gulshan's, one of my favourite areas of Hatirjheel. After traveling to these places my heart leaps with joy. I alway prefer the bus or train during any kind of long or short journey. I think there is no better way to travel around, because you can see diffirent types of natural scenaries from the window. You can also observe the diffirent types of cultures, traditions and people on your journey. It's really amazing for everyone. When I go on a journey, I try to do something interesting to keep it memorable, like singing, saying quotes or playing games. I have already covered 54 districts in Bangladesh(it's really a great achievement for me). I wish one day I can cover 64 districts of Bangladesh and I also wish to travel the rest of the beautiful world.
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Is there anyone, who will correct my passage? Actually I badly need to know how much I can improve in my creative writing. Please help me.
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