Could u please correct this passage for my creative writing ?
We all know that no one is good in this perilious situation. We have already gone through a long time, but we have not found a sufficient solution to stable this situation.
Hopefully our world will heal soon by the grace of Almighty, after which we will get a new world with its new environment.
By the way, our holy Eid-Ul-Azha has once returned after a year with the true meaning and teaching of self sacrifice. That which Allah shown to all our Muslim Ummah through the test of Ibrahim (AS). Let us overcome the current crisis situation of the country by dedicating ourselves to this teaching of self sacrifice.
Since, our current situation is unexpected as it's quite different from the previous year,so celebrate Eid with your own family and friends with following proper safety instructions and maintaining social distance. But it is very wise to stay at our own home as possible.
To my dearest friends and family a sincere "EID MUBARAK" to you all. May Allah enrich our lives with happiness, peace and prosperity and deliver us quickly from this perilious situation.
Have a nice EID Day!

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Could u please correct this passage for my creative writing ?
We all know that no one is good in this perilious situation. We have already gone through a long time, but we have not found a sufficient solution to stable this situation. 
Hopefully our world will heal soon by the grace of Almighty, after which we will get a new world with its new environment. 
By the way, our holy Eid-Ul-Azha has once returned after a year with the true meaning and teaching of self sacrifice. That which Allah shown to all our Muslim Ummah through the test of Ibrahim (AS). Let us overcome the current crisis situation of the country by dedicating ourselves to this teaching of self sacrifice. 
Since, our current situation is unexpected as it's quite different from the previous year,so celebrate Eid with your own family and friends with following proper safety instructions and maintaining social distance. But it is very wise to stay at our own home as possible.
To my dearest friends and family a sincere "EID MUBARAK" to you all. May Allah enrich our lives with happiness, peace and prosperity and deliver us quickly from this perilious situation.
Have a nice EID Day!

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I know it feels that we have all been struggling through these long and difficult times, with no solution in sight.
However, I hope our world will heal soon. By the grace of The Almighty we will have a new world and environment.
Also, our holy Eid al Adha has returned again this year, showing us the true meaning and teaching of self sacrifice. That which Allah has shown to all our Muslim Ummah through the test of Ibrahim (AS). Let us overcome the current crisis situation of the country by dedicating ourselves to this teaching of self sacrifice. 
Since, our current situation is unexpectedly different from last year, please remember to celebrate this Eid with your own family and friends. It is very wise to stay at our own homes as much as possible, following the safety instructions and maintaining social distancing. 
To my dearest friends and family a sincere "EID MUBARAK" to you all. May Allah enrich our lives with happiness, peace and prosperity and deliver us quickly from this difficult situation.
Have a nice EID Day!

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