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Could you please check the paragraph below? Please help me. //'/ It's harder to correct text here than in the Notebook section! I've done what I can. In the end it seemed better to show you a rewritten version; commenting on the changes caused too much disruption to the text. I hope this helps. The body depends on the involvement of multiple mechanisms in order to stop bleeding. This process is called hemostasis ("haemostasis" in British English). The stages of hemostasis are: Primary hemostasis 1. Vasoconstriction: The body's first response to damage in the vascular wall is vasoconstriction. When there is injury, the vessel walls are constricted, so causing decreased blood flow to the injury site. /// "to" for "into" is the only suggestion in this paragraph. 2. Platelet plug: Platelets aggregate at the injury site. They stick together, acting as a "plug." The platelets also activate the process that causes the formation of a fibrin clot. This is known as secondary hemostasis. 3. Secondary hemostasis: Platelets alone are not enough to repair the damage to the vessel wall. age. A clot must form at the injury site. The formation of a clot depends upon many substances, called clotting factors. These factors are indicated by Roman numerals, from I through to XIII. The end result of this process is that fibrinogen, a soluble plasma protein, is converted to a non-soluble plasma protein called fibrin. The proteins on the fibrin bind together to form a clot. A clotting cascade takes place through two different interacting pathways, the intrinsic and the extrinsic pathway. Extrinsic Pathway External trauma causes blood to escape from the vascular system, and this triggers the extrinsic pathway. https://www.cliffsnotes.com/study-guides/anatomy-and-physiology/the-cardiovascular-system/hemostasis

The end result of this process is that fibrinogen, a soluble plasma protein, is stick into a non-soluble plasma protein called fibrin. The proteins on the fibrin stick together to form a clot. Clotting cascade takes place through two different interacting pathways, the intrinsic and the extrinsic pathway. Extrinsic Pathway External trauma triggers the extrinsic pathway which causes the blood to escape from the vascular system.

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