Does it sounds natural? Is there any grammartically errors? (Give me some corrections)
佳佳是一个护士，因为疫情，她被政府要求去武汉看护病人，因此她需要离开她父母。她父母不愿意让她去，可是佳佳必须去因为这是政府的命令。不久，他父母就同意了。佳佳先整理行李然后去买飞机票。因为疫情，飞机票的价格就比较便宜了。最后，他父母希望他在武汉平安无事。

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Change “不久”into ”最终”；Change "就同意了"into "只能同意了"；
佳佳is a girl, so we should use"她”all the time, not "他"; 
You can delete the word "最后".

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In fact, we don't often see the words like because and so which doesn't sounds natural.   As a non-inflectional and parataxis language,  conjunction words are normally not deployed in the sentence.  Apart from that, you  better not use the “被” in the Chinese sentence because it always has negative  implication.

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sounds very good to me. Although I am a foreigner. But yes, looks good. Seems like natural Chinese.

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