It's interesting! You should only check the grammar!
7 rules of business communication

Business etiquettE and skills are very important in effective communication. If you want to HAVE effective communication to your message should be:
Complete
Correct
Concise
Concrete
Considerable
Courteous
Clear

Thank you so much Leslie for your help!
Much obliged!

Question

It's interesting! You should only check the grammar!
7 rules of business communication

Business etiquettE and skills are very important in effective communication. If you want to HAVE effective communication to your message should be:
Complete
Correct
Concise
Concrete
Considerable
Courteous
Clear

Thank you so much Leslie for your help!
Much obliged!

Answer

Thank you so much Leslie for your help!
Much obliged!

Answer

Just a few suggestions:

Etiquettes should be singular:  etiquette

"If you want to get" should be "If you want to have" or " If you want to be more effective, your message should be::"

Good question and hope this helps.

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