who want to go to the zoo in this coming vacation ?
The natianal day is coming , we'll have 8 days holiday . since there is not much money & no boyfriend , i decide to go to the zoo .(sometimes looking at the wild animals is better than think of some guy's face..) would anyone who is now shanghai want to join me ?most people want to see pandas there , i think. but what i m interested in is to feed the lions ~~but no one want to go with me so far ....

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who  want  to  go  to  the  zoo  in  this  coming  vacation ? 
  The  natianal  day  is  coming  ,  we'll   have  8  days  holiday .  since  there  is  not  much  money & no  boyfriend , i  decide  to  go  to  the  zoo .(sometimes  looking  at  the  wild animals is  better  than  think  of  some  guy's  face..)  would  anyone  who  is  now  shanghai  want  to  join  me ?most people want to see pandas  there ,  i think. but  what  i  m  interested  in  is  to  feed  the lions ~~but  no  one want to  go  with  me  so  far ....

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Hi Vicky. 
You write well. I'll suggest alternate wording:

"National Day is coming, and we'll have 8 vacation days (or, "it's an 8-day holiday).  Since I don't have much money, and no boyfriend, I've decided to go to the zoo (sometimes looking at the wild animals is better that thinking of some guy's face).  Would anyone who is now in Shanghai like to join me?"

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Which are the most interesting animals residing in Shanghai zoo ?

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I try to steal your idea, going to the San Diego Zoo. But, it cost USD35 for the admission. It is more expensive than going out to the movie and having a lobster dinner. Anyway, you are the lucky girl, have a happy holiday.

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I want to go to with you but i am not in shanghai

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Hi Vicky

I'm not in China... but have fun!!!

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